Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Grows the Night

Grows the night, tremulous passage nigh
Aught of earth ushered my boat of hope
Tint of virtue brightening cressets
Lights of love, I left behind the shore.

Grows the night, for the glitter I rove
For the lost heaven fringing my fate
Hue of kindness, I shown in the land
Eased the pain of death, while grows the night.


Second Place in Grows the night Poetry Contest sponsored by nette onclaud

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Rashi Soni June 14, 2020 at 4:26 AM A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Rashi Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 5:06 AM Thank you Rashi for your delightful words..

Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 7:22 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. Keep writing and inspiring :) Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:32 AM Thank you Aditi.. And congrats to you too.. Have a great day..

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2020 at 12:49 PM love the tone and diction of your work, jenish.. sweet congrats on your high win in my contest...huggs Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:30 AM Thank you Nette and I'm so delighted to hear those words and the placement.. You squeeze the best out of us through your contest.. Thank you..

Krish Radhakrishna June 13, 2020 at 3:22 AM Congrats Jenish. Love the use of words like Aught, nigh, cressets! Very creative! Regards Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:29 AM Thank you Krish for your kind support.. Have a nice day!!

Aditi Mishra June 10, 2020 at 2:34 PM "Tint of virtue brightening cressets","lights of love" your words create a beautiful painting on canvas. This is lovely Jenish! You are a master of mystical poetry. :) Blessings! Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 12:30 AM Thank you Aditi.. Your words are more sweeter than a win..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 10, 2020 at 7:39 AM Pure magic dearest, Jenish. Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 12:29 AM Magic is your pen.. If there is any, I borrowed from there... Thank you Demetrios..

Mahtab Bangalee June 10, 2020 at 6:09 AM superb verse shared........pleasure to read...thanks Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 12:28 AM Thank you Mahtab for that delightful words...

Vijay Pandit June 10, 2020 at 6:01 AM This so well written, Jenish--I enjoyed the read. I see a winner! Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 12:27 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind support..

John Hardison June 10, 2020 at 3:44 AM So nicely stated. Lots of luck in the contest. Peace, Love and Joy. Jenish Somadas June 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM Thank you John for your kind support.. Stay safe..

Tom Cunningham June 10, 2020 at 2:19 AM You composed this well Jenish using the repeat phrases, good luck in the contest. Tom Jenish Somadas June 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM Thank you Tom for your kind support.. Stay safe..