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Grown Up

Not a cloud in the sky; everything’s blue It’s all fun and games; nothing to do But then they grew up… and everything changed The days grew longer; their patient’s grow shorter The sun went away; they only saw gray The magic was gone; it was taken away. -sd

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Date: 1/7/2014 2:28:00 AM
Hi Sammy, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Poignant poem you have here - it paints a grim but very true picture about growing up. Very well stated! There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Date: 12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM
Sammy, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/27/2013 4:40:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sammy ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2013 12:42:00 AM
Sammy, wow.. That is no fun, when the magic up and leaves. Wish we could remain young always. , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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