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The wolf wind rakes its teeth across the stanchions of paper birches seeming to peel strips of bark rolling back the pristine white flesh to the tanned heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/31/2012 8:09:00 AM
wow. this short poem says alot.
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Date: 9/25/2012 7:33:00 AM
It's simply a great work of innocence suffering. Lovely poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/24/2012 9:28:00 AM
When winds blow off the bark from trees. That's when you'll find me on my knees. Down in the basement to stay alive. Hoping and praying that I survive.
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Date: 9/24/2012 8:58:00 AM
That carniverous wind strafes the grizzled skin and bores to the fibrous core. A nice, metaphorical allusion. Enjoyed your imaginative verse!
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Date: 9/23/2012 9:17:00 PM
A very intriguing write!!
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Date: 9/23/2012 7:02:00 PM
Wow! Debbie, I love this wonderfully descriptive poem. Your imagery in this is so refreshingly different. Great work. Love, Kim
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