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'grow Fainter'

our doubts fade away when our focal point becomes positivity ©142011082013

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 10/6/2013 9:41:00 AM

So true

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/3/2013 4:47:00 AM

Breath-taking Haiku, no wonder I favourited it!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/12/2013 9:35:00 PM

Yes this is true Wilma....very very important that we focus on the positive and not the negative. Stepping out on faith with courage is a must...hugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/12/2013 9:36:00 AM

I am going to say it again-- you should write another book, you sure can be such a motivational and inspiring writer, Missy. I am in funky mode now, so this was a must read for me-- so few words but message is so succinct and straightforward. Bull's eye! mwahugs and thanks for writing-- I replied there if you want to read-- pray for those affected by the typhoon. Miss you back and mwahugs!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/12/2013 12:36:00 AM

Very true. This is a good read

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2013 11:02:00 PM

You sure have brightened my evening with this wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, quite this brilliant verse, Great Work!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2013 3:33:00 PM

Excellent syllable count and message in this senryu. You are the picture of positivity!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/11/2013 1:40:00 PM

Very nice message in this Senryu Wilma.Enjoyed the read.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 1:22:00 PM

Hello lovely Wilma, positive is the best way... a great senryu... always~ Linda

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/11/2013 9:50:00 AM

For sure. Stay positive, homegirl. Enjoy the long weekend, my friend. Ek moet ongelukkig die hele naweek werk. No rest for the devil and its ilk. Nice one, Wilma. Licia (^__^)

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/11/2013 8:21:00 AM

Wowsers! You sure got that right my dear Wilma! Warm hugs xoxox

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2013 6:36:00 AM

- ... true, Wilma ! - Have a great Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)