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Grow a Great Dream

Grow a great dream grow a great dream on your good heart sprinkle everyday with passion and love share to others every inch of its growth from its basic colour till its final glamour strengthen its roots with the smile of compassion and avoid the pollution of desperation once it turn to dwarf hard to sustain its life let the branches open their arms to support the shoots of possibilities let the leaves speak out their expectations till the winds around clapping happily echo the surounding a great dream has grown well ~(c) Sukmawati Komala~ May 2014

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:49:00 AM
Sukmawati, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/12/2014 5:04:00 PM
truly very beautifully painted piece
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:32:00 PM
The ending of this poem is a personification delight!! You brought this tree of love such emotion and it was truly appreciated by the accompanying wind!
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:57:00 AM
Hello, my very dear sista SK! Hugs! I'm so so glad to see you around and read this poem of yours. You wrote a very beautiful inspirational poem and a song at the same time. I love it so much. Thank you for sharing! It's my great honor to comment first here. Thanks also for stopping by. I'm so happy to read from you again. Sending you hugs with this poem. love lots your sista, Leonora
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