Sukmawati Komala Poet Free verse

Grow a Great Dream

Grow a great dream

grow a great dream
on your good heart
sprinkle everyday
with passion and love
share to others
every inch of its growth
from its basic colour
till its final glamour

strengthen its roots
with the smile of compassion
and
avoid the pollution of desperation

once it turn to dwarf
hard to sustain its life

let the branches open their arms
to support the shoots of possibilities
let the leaves
speak out their expectations
till the winds around
clapping happily
echo the surounding
a great dream has grown well 

~(c) Sukmawati Komala~
May 2014

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Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 11:49 AM Sukmawati, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Liam Mcdaid October 12, 2014 at 5:04 PM truly very beautifully painted piece

Gwendolen Song August 4, 2014 at 6:32 PM The ending of this poem is a personification delight!! You brought this tree of love such emotion and it was truly appreciated by the accompanying wind!

Len Gasun June 4, 2014 at 7:57 AM Hello, my very dear sista SK! Hugs! I'm so so glad to see you around and read this poem of yours. You wrote a very beautiful inspirational poem and a song at the same time. I love it so much. Thank you for sharing! It's my great honor to comment first here. Thanks also for stopping by. I'm so happy to read from you again. Sending you hugs with this poem. love lots your sista, Leonora