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Groused

If you decide to
                               dig up your lush green grass to
                                    Plant on my side, you~

                               Are more than welcome;
                                    Otherwise keep to your side
                               And stop complaining.~

                                    Always remember 
                               when it rains, it pours down on
                                    All God's creation.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT
08-21-2012

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Bauke Kamstra Date: 3/25/2014 8:11:00 PM A hidden fence, nicely done. : ) Login to Reply

Sean L Sanders Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM Good job!!!!! Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 10/9/2012 10:59:00 PM You got that right! Informative write here..I like it... Login to Reply

Doreen Wright Date: 9/25/2012 10:23:00 PM Could I have missed this? I love it. Rain inspires growth! Lovely wite Ink. Login to Reply

Ann Roske Date: 9/20/2012 3:22:00 PM Well done Pace - is that your puppy on your avatar?? Login to Reply

April Walter Skyy Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM Just wanted 2 thank u 4 da comment u left on my poem Beauy Fly i have so many more its just that im knew 2 this site n if u have any thing that i could b doing different feel free 2 let me know. in I really like this one simple n straight 2 the point. Check out my new poem i posted yesderday. thank Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 9/18/2012 10:26:00 PM Nice "free verse" write, my dear! Though these aren't haikus, I really enjoyed it, made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Caroline. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/14/2012 1:55:00 PM pace, such heartfelt lines and images that really charm my world... captivating!..:) hugggs and more Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/13/2012 2:15:00 PM Are you buried together Pace? Nice to get those boundaries set and alleviate trouble before it starts! :) Luv, Lizzie Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/11/2012 1:06:00 PM Obviously married or too long shacking. Lol Login to Reply

L.Ruby Meyer Date: 9/7/2012 12:52:00 AM Amen Ink, can't say how much I couldn't agree with you more here! X Peace Ruby Login to Reply

Kenisha Shines Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 AM nice one :) Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 9/3/2012 8:07:00 AM so true.... wonderful write my friend. thanks for dropping by and your inspiring comments. have a wonderful day, always!!!! :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/3/2012 1:10:00 AM Excellent Pace in my humble opinion excellent xx Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 8/30/2012 5:36:00 PM I am looking at a new poet to the poetrysoup community in awe of the awesome work you have displayed here in such a short time! You never cease to amaze me. Keep thee old pen flowing, always, Lucinda aka Cindy :) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:29:00 AM Wow..such a beautiful comment of yours..I'm deeply honored and proud..thank you for your neverending support!!! hugs :)

Harry Horsman Date: 8/30/2012 6:44:00 AM Pace, these are awesome man! the message here shouts out loud. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:28:00 AM Thank you Harry always sir!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/29/2012 6:27:00 PM Well said and well done!!! xoxo - Laila Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:27:00 AM Hugs!!! Thank you dearly Laila!!

Annie Lander Date: 8/29/2012 11:39:00 AM nicely .. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Thank you for your visit Annie!!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2012 3:24:00 AM You are really good at haiku poems. This was lovely - well done oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM Always a pleasure Anne!!

Laura Breidenthal Date: 8/28/2012 10:27:00 PM Amazing set! After a rather gloomy day, reading this was refreshing!!! Thanks for the eye opener. <3 Always, Laura Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Thank you Laura always!! hugs

Len Gasun Date: 8/28/2012 10:39:00 AM Wow!!! Great write, Pace. I love it. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM Thank you always Leonora!!

Cynthia Alvez Date: 8/27/2012 8:47:00 PM Great penning. What a way to leave a message...Grit and truth! Cynthia Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM Thank you dearly Cynthia!!

Carma Sanderson Date: 8/27/2012 3:55:00 PM eye soring, poping haiku here INK, the grass is always greener on the other side... lol a message well penned..... NO COMPLAINTS EVER with your work my friend. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM *Carma- not cream..sorry..lol Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/31/2012 11:23:00 AM Thank you sweet n sour cream!! Hugs

Devondra Banks Date: 8/26/2012 9:52:00 PM Haiku at its best! Lovely! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/27/2012 2:28:00 AM Devondra glad to have you share with me...hope to see you again..keep writing!!

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/26/2012 7:48:00 PM This is good and so true. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/27/2012 2:27:00 AM Thank you Lucilla for sharing with me madam!!!

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