Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

Groused

If you decide to
                               dig up your lush green grass to
                                    Plant on my side, you~

                               Are more than welcome;
                                    Otherwise keep to your side
                               And stop complaining.~

                                    Always remember 
                               when it rains, it pours down on
                                    All God's creation.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT
08-21-2012

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Bauke Kamstra March 25, 2014 at 8:11 PM A hidden fence, nicely done. : )

Sean L Sanders February 24, 2013 at 6:44 AM Good job!!!!!

Dan Kearley October 9, 2012 at 10:59 PM You got that right! Informative write here..I like it...

Doreen Wright September 25, 2012 at 10:23 PM Could I have missed this? I love it. Rain inspires growth! Lovely wite Ink.

Ann Roske September 20, 2012 at 3:22 PM Well done Pace - is that your puppy on your avatar??

April Walter Skyy September 20, 2012 at 2:01 PM Just wanted 2 thank u 4 da comment u left on my poem Beauy Fly i have so many more its just that im knew 2 this site n if u have any thing that i could b doing different feel free 2 let me know. in I really like this one simple n straight 2 the point. Check out my new poem i posted yesderday. thank

Caroline Cécile Delacroix September 18, 2012 at 10:26 PM Nice "free verse" write, my dear! Though these aren't haikus, I really enjoyed it, made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Nette Onclaud September 14, 2012 at 1:55 PM pace, such heartfelt lines and images that really charm my world... captivating!..:) hugggs and more

Elizabeth Wesley September 13, 2012 at 2:15 PM Are you buried together Pace? Nice to get those boundaries set and alleviate trouble before it starts! :) Luv, Lizzie

John Loving Iii September 11, 2012 at 1:06 PM Obviously married or too long shacking. Lol

L.Ruby Meyer September 7, 2012 at 12:52 AM Amen Ink, can't say how much I couldn't agree with you more here! X Peace Ruby

Kenisha Shines September 4, 2012 at 8:32 AM nice one :)

Len Gasun September 3, 2012 at 8:07 AM so true.... wonderful write my friend. thanks for dropping by and your inspiring comments. have a wonderful day, always!!!! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 3, 2012 at 1:10 AM Excellent Pace in my humble opinion excellent xx

Cindy Cayton August 30, 2012 at 5:36 PM I am looking at a new poet to the poetrysoup community in awe of the awesome work you have displayed here in such a short time! You never cease to amaze me. Keep thee old pen flowing, always, Lucinda aka Cindy :) Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:29 AM Wow..such a beautiful comment of yours..I'm deeply honored and proud..thank you for your neverending support!!! hugs :)

Harry Horsman August 30, 2012 at 6:44 AM Pace, these are awesome man! the message here shouts out loud. Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:28 AM Thank you Harry always sir!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde August 29, 2012 at 6:27 PM Well said and well done!!! xoxo - Laila Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:27 AM Hugs!!! Thank you dearly Laila!!

Annie Lander August 29, 2012 at 11:39 AM nicely .. Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:26 AM Thank you for your visit Annie!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2012 at 3:24 AM You are really good at haiku poems. This was lovely - well done oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:26 AM Always a pleasure Anne!!

Laura Breidenthal August 28, 2012 at 10:27 PM Amazing set! After a rather gloomy day, reading this was refreshing!!! Thanks for the eye opener. <3 Always, Laura Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:25 AM Thank you Laura always!! hugs

Len Gasun August 28, 2012 at 10:39 AM Wow!!! Great write, Pace. I love it. Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:25 AM Thank you always Leonora!!

Cynthia Alvez August 27, 2012 at 8:47 PM Great penning. What a way to leave a message...Grit and truth! Cynthia Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:24 AM Thank you dearly Cynthia!!

Carma Sanderson August 27, 2012 at 3:55 PM eye soring, poping haiku here INK, the grass is always greener on the other side... lol a message well penned..... NO COMPLAINTS EVER with your work my friend. Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:24 AM *Carma- not cream..sorry..lol Pace Ink-U-Script August 31, 2012 at 11:23 AM Thank you sweet n sour cream!! Hugs

Devondra Banks August 26, 2012 at 9:52 PM Haiku at its best! Lovely! Pace Ink-U-Script August 27, 2012 at 2:28 AM Devondra glad to have you share with me...hope to see you again..keep writing!!

Lucilla Carrillo August 26, 2012 at 7:48 PM This is good and so true. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Pace Ink-U-Script August 27, 2012 at 2:27 AM Thank you Lucilla for sharing with me madam!!!

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