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Grook

He tells of how he bravely fought the state's enemies at the border quite lately. Enemies would have conquered, if not for his silent, courageous son. Date: 13/02/2016

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Date: 5/3/2016 7:56:00 AM
Wow! Fits the definition of Grook to a T. Excellent write, Teddy. Loved it.
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:18:00 AM
Anytime
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks for the reply
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/27/2016 1:38:00 AM
Welcome Linda.
Date: 2/18/2016 8:09:00 PM
this is thought provoking. I really like it, Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2016 5:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/18/2016 2:03:00 AM
:) LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/20/2016 5:04:00 AM
;-) Teddy
Date: 2/17/2016 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2016 1:10:00 AM
Thanks Susan!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, Teddy. Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Janice!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 9:55:00 AM
Teddy, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/18/2016 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Linda!! *^_^*
Date: 2/16/2016 9:12:00 PM
Hello Teddy. Thanks for your participation in this contest. If I may add a word of advice, a grook typically aims to be universal, sort of like a wise saying, or something that makes you say, "A-ha! I get it!". I'm not sure exactly who the "he" in this poem is, or the courageous son. And so I'm unsure of what the message is ... Hope this helps! Keep writing, friend.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/17/2016 1:21:00 AM
Hi Timothy. Thanks for making me understand more about grooks. I'll keep on practicing and reading them more! ;-)

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