Grok the Weeping Willow

Joyous tears aplenty, in search of willow trees,
where ancient might has fallen, shriveled, sagging life and limb.
Thirsty seeds of sacred trust have scattered ‘cross the seas.
Seething words of wisdom sing in glorious praise of sin.

Where ancient might has fallen, shriveled, sagging life and limb,
the shifting sands of time have formed a desert ‘neath the roots.
Seething words of wisdom sing in glorious praise of sin.
Drink my loving tears oh tree; I labor for your fruits.

The shifting sands of time have formed a desert ‘neath the roots.
Thirsty seeds of sacred trust have scattered ‘cross the seas
Drink my loving tears oh tree; I labor for your fruits.
Joyous tears aplenty, in search of willow trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Wow! I love it! I had forgotten how wonderfully you write. I hope to return often. Love and Hugs, Dane Ann
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Great write. Last line of first quatrain is especially poignant.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Yoni,magnifique:)!a beauty-Charma
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March 27, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Regarding your comment, Yoni, no need to apologize. I like a sense of humor. Life is way too serious sometimes. I enjoy someone that can look at things and laugh a little. Thanks for giving me a chance to smile today. Karen
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March 27, 2010 at 8:25 AM
You made the repetition work in this poem Nice use of imagery and rhyme. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Ryerson Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Beautifully done, Yoni!...every line is a gem...and such a difficult form! - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Great Pantoum..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:33 AM
I have a willow out my back window, this poem is beautiful. mail
Corcoran Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 8:36 PM
absolutely marvelous poem.
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