Grog

Grog

Gulping down a flagon 

Gives one a gibbous glow. 

Gather 'round ye hardies,

Grab one and have a go. 

Ghostly foam and farting 

Gnomes bilge one gushing flow.

Garish gaffe...drinking Grog!


deborah burch©12/4/2016

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Form: Pleiades

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Darren White

February 10, 2017 at 1:18 AM

Coming back atcha with congratulations :)

Agnes Krampe

February 9, 2017 at 9:46 PM

What a fun clever pleiades, and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, Deborah.

Laura Leiser

February 9, 2017 at 8:17 PM

Very clever, Deborah! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

February 9, 2017 at 7:43 PM

Love it! Congrats, Deborah!

Kim Merryman

February 9, 2017 at 6:00 PM

Oh my goodness, I thought a man had written this! Deborah this was so humorous, creative and clever and your words just flowed. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Lim'Rik Flats

December 17, 2016 at 8:29 AM

GOTD! (giggle of the day award). Huggaloos! ~ john.

Deborah Burch

December 19, 2016 at 11:32 AM

I just found out how honoured I am!! I received the GOTD!!! Wow!! And didn't realize what hit me!! Calls for more Grog!! All 'round!!!! Thank you!! Thank you!!;)

Deborah Burch

December 17, 2016 at 8:35 AM

Lol! Thank you kindly, flats! Wonderful to hear from you! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Darren White

December 10, 2016 at 6:12 AM

Ya think that's how it was in Lord of the Rings? That's one groggy poem and I love it to bits. Nice meter too (apart from the last line). Good luck in the contest

Deborah Burch

December 10, 2016 at 7:51 AM

Could have been,Darren. Lol. Or with any pirate out of rum. It was for effect. I'll rework it after contest. Thanks for the insight. Big Hugggs. Deb :)