Grog

Grog Gulping down a flagon Gives one a gibbous glow. Gather 'round ye hardies, Grab one and have a go. Ghostly foam and farting Gnomes bilge one gushing flow. Garish gaffe...drinking Grog! deborah burch©12/4/2016 _______________________________ Form: Pleiades

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Darren White

Date: 2/10/2017 1:18:00 AM

Coming back atcha with congratulations :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/9/2017 9:46:00 PM

What a fun clever pleiades, and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, Deborah.

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/9/2017 8:17:00 PM

Very clever, Deborah! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2017 7:43:00 PM

Love it! Congrats, Deborah!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/9/2017 6:00:00 PM

Oh my goodness, I thought a man had written this! Deborah this was so humorous, creative and clever and your words just flowed. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/17/2016 8:29:00 AM

GOTD! (giggle of the day award). Huggaloos! ~ john.

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/19/2016 11:32:00 AM

I just found out how honoured I am!! I received the GOTD!!! Wow!! And didn't realize what hit me!! Calls for more Grog!! All 'round!!!! Thank you!! Thank you!!;)

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/17/2016 8:35:00 AM

Lol! Thank you kindly, flats! Wonderful to hear from you! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Darren White

Date: 12/10/2016 6:12:00 AM

Ya think that's how it was in Lord of the Rings? That's one groggy poem and I love it to bits. Nice meter too (apart from the last line). Good luck in the contest

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/10/2016 7:51:00 AM

Could have been,Darren. Lol. Or with any pirate out of rum. It was for effect. I'll rework it after contest. Thanks for the insight. Big Hugggs. Deb :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 12:16:00 PM

Very amusing poem Deborah good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/5/2016 12:24:00 PM

Lol. Thank you Jan. Good Wishes for you too! Big Hugggs. Cap'n Deb