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Gritted Teeth

Whizzing round the bend gritted teeth, Nearly met my end. Entry for Biker's Dozen Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy 23/9/18. 5-3-5 syllables. Placed 2nd.

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/4/2018 7:54:00 AM

I felt the tension, Gary! Well-done! Congrats on your win. Sandra

Gary Smith
Date: 10/4/2018 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Sandra :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2018 6:28:00 PM

Good one, Gary. Congrats on your win.

Gary Smith
Date: 10/4/2018 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Line :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2018 4:06:00 PM

Now that's scary! A great little rhyme that packs a punch.

Gary Smith
Date: 9/27/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thank you M.L. :)

Aqua Marine

Date: 9/24/2018 1:06:00 PM

: D...true grit...could have ended up with grit in your teeth! Best for the contest!

Gary Smith
Date: 9/24/2018 1:18:00 PM

Thank you A.M. :)