Gripped by Nature

Written: January 2nd, 2025, for Contest, Sponsored by: Constance La France ______________________________ I caught an enormous fish and held him by the boat midway to the water, caught in a damp pitch with a tight hook in the front of his throat he did not fight, just as I wish to devote. Bowfin can occasionally be seen leading the dwarf length of the eel excess during low tide in between they're twisting and swinging for real wrapped in some foils of a green meal. He grips the crag with twisted hands an eagle soaring to the sky and sway close to the sun in desolate lands amidst the azure universe, may it fey ready to sink and scoop its picked prey.
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Swan Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 3:04 AM
What a superb creature! I like how you show the eagle's power and skill in both the realm of water and air. J :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
George Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 5:11 AM
Creatures of water and air give us endless curiosity and joy. I enjoyed watching the video and the thoughts from the perspective of the eagle. There is so much grace in the eagle's swooping down and catching of the fish.
Hawley Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 7:40 PM
First of all you picked the exact right video for your poem. Second your words paint an excellent picture of this catch. Good job.
Hind Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:38 PM
This is really interesting - I liked how you switched from your point of view to the eagle's
M  Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 8:32 AM
What a lovely poem Lasaad full of wonderful imagery. Its obvious the love and appreciation for have for nature and animals! Debx
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Lasaad your words have the reader feel, see, the imagery so fine. Wishing you a safe and healthy New Year. God bless you my friend...
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 1:00 PM
You painted this very well, I could imagine it all very clearly! Happy New Year Sotto, I hope you have many blessings in the new year ahead :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:46 PM
What a wonderful write with a great picture. "Good Luck" Have A Blessed New Year 2025........
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