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Grin 55

'First comes the abandoning, then the state of been left behind, finally remains the abandonment. Once asked how I'd overcome. I said. Not. Not defeating, nor overcoming is what you do on your own.' She watches her hands they are two of them. ‘You still have your children?' - No, they have me. - You always have yourself? - Myself, I was a parcel a present of my wife. She opened it once.'

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Date: 10/14/2010 6:22:00 AM
enjoyed this revealing write...melancholy
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Date: 10/14/2010 5:09:00 AM
Yes, I am making you a favorite, and I am inviting you to drop by soon. Powerful write here, love it.
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