Grimly Shake

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Life start poor hating scum living fled the drain earns to eat He wore glitzy gowns on stage his zany facade

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/6/2022 10:44:00 AM

A beautiful write and picture. Never read a Shadorma poem before. Very nice. Have a blessed day and New Year...............

Judy Ball

Date: 1/3/2022 11:06:00 AM

Hmmmm Liberache? Nicely done. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Craig Bowden

Date: 1/2/2022 6:30:00 AM

Never heard of a shadorma but very interesting.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2022 1:02:00 AM

Never heard of this form. You seem quite adept to it. Well done Lasaad and may this New Year be a happy and healthy one.