Grieve

Thirty-nine and thirty-eight…
Let me get this straight.

Thirty-seven and thirty-six…
How can I be in this fix?

Thirty-five and thirty-four…
Are you sure there is no more?

Thirty-three and thirty-two…
What can I do?

Thirty-one and thirty…
Now I'm getting shirty!

Twenty-nine and twenty-eight…
I don't accept this fate!

Twenty-seven and twenty-six…
I refuse to be in this fix!

Twenty-five and twenty-four…
I’ll settle this score.

Twenty-three and twenty-two…
What's my life worth to you?

Twenty-one and twenty…
If it's money, I've got plenty.

Nineteen and eighteen…
I demand to stay on the scene!

Seventeen and sixteen…
C'mon! On a deal, I’m keen.

Fifteen and fourteen…
Your stubbornness is obscene.

Thirteen and twelve…
I’ve negotiations to shelve.

Eleven and ten…
I guess I'll just give in.

Nine and eight…
It's getting late.

Seven and six…
This, I can't fix.

Five and four…
There is no more.

Three and two…
I love you.

One and done.
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Romios Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:15 PM
Excellent and unusual write,Linda! I dont know from contests. Nonetheless, hope you enjoy the process. Let me know how you do. Love you, Pangie.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:51 AM
It's nice to have a prompt for creativity now and then Pangie. I so appreciate you being in my life. Thank ou! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:41 AM
What a creative write. Are you saying, you are 39??? Your Birthday??? Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away...........
Fowler Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:56 PM
No, I saw 39 a few years back. LOL I wrote this for Anthony's 39 Minutes contest. hugs and blessings! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:40 AM
Hello Linda flower, that is a lot of grief. too much I think. Time will heal that grief. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Hello Linda Fowler, i did not know there are 5 steps to grieving. I just remember the anger after that i was okay. My husband made me angry. Because hed died, i can not ask him questions. so I have unanswered questions to woinder why. Hugs. /Darlene/
Fowler Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Yes, it is much to go through Darlene De Beaulieu. They say there are five to seven steps in the grieving process. I've written to only five. Thank you for visiting! hugs :)
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