Grieve

Thirty-nine and thirty-eight…
Let me get this straight.

Thirty-seven and thirty-six…
How can I be in this fix?

Thirty-five and thirty-four…
Are you sure there is no more?

Thirty-three and thirty-two…
What can I do?

Thirty-one and thirty…
Now I'm getting shirty!

Twenty-nine and twenty-eight…
I don't accept this fate!

Twenty-seven and twenty-six…
I refuse to be in this fix!

Twenty-five and twenty-four…
I’ll settle this score.

Twenty-three and twenty-two…
What's my life worth to you?

Twenty-one and twenty…
If it's money, I've got plenty.

Nineteen and eighteen…
I demand to stay on the scene!

Seventeen and sixteen…
C'mon! On a deal, I’m keen.

Fifteen and fourteen…
Your stubbornness is obscene.

Thirteen and twelve…
I’ve negotiations to shelve.

Eleven and ten…
I guess I'll just give in.

Nine and eight…
It's getting late.

Seven and six…
This, I can't fix.

Five and four…
There is no more.

Three and two…
I love you.

One and done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/30/2024 9:15:00 PM
Excellent and unusual write,Linda! I dont know from contests. Nonetheless, hope you enjoy the process. Let me know how you do. Love you, Pangie.
Login to Reply
Fowler Avatar
Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/1/2024 6:51:00 AM
It's nice to have a prompt for creativity now and then Pangie. I so appreciate you being in my life. Thank ou! :)
Date: 9/26/2024 11:41:00 AM
What a creative write. Are you saying, you are 39??? Your Birthday??? Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away...........
Login to Reply
Fowler Avatar
Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/26/2024 12:56:00 PM
No, I saw 39 a few years back. LOL I wrote this for Anthony's 39 Minutes contest. hugs and blessings! :)
Date: 9/26/2024 11:40:00 AM
Hello Linda flower, that is a lot of grief. too much I think. Time will heal that grief. Hugs. /Darlene/
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2024 10:00:00 AM
Hello Linda Fowler, i did not know there are 5 steps to grieving. I just remember the anger after that i was okay. My husband made me angry. Because hed died, i can not ask him questions. so I have unanswered questions to woinder why. Hugs. /Darlene/
Fowler Avatar
Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/26/2024 12:54:00 PM
Yes, it is much to go through Darlene De Beaulieu. They say there are five to seven steps in the grieving process. I've written to only five. Thank you for visiting! hugs :)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter