Grief of Betrayal

Oh summer’s love flown
gone with the swallows on wing,
life now insipid
when warmth torn out of one’s heart
like the pending storm; freezes.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Skat A

October 4, 2013 at 9:17 PM

A nice win Harry, congrats......... SKAT

Sandra Adams

October 2, 2013 at 8:24 AM

splendid write....congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 2, 2013 at 4:54 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, harry

Joe Maverick

October 1, 2013 at 2:54 PM

Arresting discriptions in this write Harry, How are you these days?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 1, 2013 at 9:49 AM

Congratulations harry, another wonderful piece from you xx

Justin Bordner

September 24, 2013 at 2:08 PM

At least the needles of the great chill can keep us awake to the magnificent struggle towards liberty - J.A.B. %

John Loving Iii

September 21, 2013 at 2:55 PM

this morning i woke up like a teen ager.with new hopes in someone else. how long will that last?

Charmaine Chircop

September 21, 2013 at 2:22 PM

So deep this is..Describing so well the coldness and pain of being deceived.

Lucilla Carrillo

September 21, 2013 at 10:49 AM

Betrayal hurts. great poem. Is it for the contest? If it is - good luck.... Lucilla

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 18, 2013 at 1:50 PM

this is penetratingly sad to think about, not only summer going , but never let the warmth be torn from ones heart I am sure that will never happen xx xx