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Grief of Betrayal

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Oh summer’s love flown gone with the swallows on wing, life now insipid when warmth torn out of one’s heart like the pending storm; freezes. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Skat A

Date: 10/4/2013 9:17:00 PM

A nice win Harry, congrats......... SKAT

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2013 8:24:00 AM

splendid write....congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/2/2013 4:54:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, harry

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/1/2013 2:54:00 PM

Arresting discriptions in this write Harry, How are you these days?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/1/2013 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations harry, another wonderful piece from you xx

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/24/2013 2:08:00 PM

At least the needles of the great chill can keep us awake to the magnificent struggle towards liberty - J.A.B. %

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/21/2013 2:55:00 PM

this morning i woke up like a teen ager.with new hopes in someone else. how long will that last?

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/21/2013 2:22:00 PM

So deep this is..Describing so well the coldness and pain of being deceived.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/21/2013 10:49:00 AM

Betrayal hurts. great poem. Is it for the contest? If it is - good luck.... Lucilla

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/18/2013 1:50:00 PM

this is penetratingly sad to think about, not only summer going , but never let the warmth be torn from ones heart I am sure that will never happen xx xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/18/2013 1:19:00 PM

Very deep my sweet friend. It's a silent betrayal, cool volcano so freezes. Excellent expression with deep imagination. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2013 9:31:00 AM

Good day Harry. wow.. now's deep,,, and betrayal... thanks for sharing you lovely comment this morning.. :-)..Linda