Grief and Loss

Gathered together with loved ones all around
reminiscing memories though you don’t hear a sound
isolated in your grief ~ oh how can this be true
even though so many came you feel alone you are not there
for no one knows just how you feel ~ you pray they never will

And afterwards the pain is worse no mention of his name 
no they fear it will upset ~ you love his name you’ll ne’er forget
despite your tears despite your pain ~ oh why do they not speak his name

Love so strong that when it’s gone your heart has truly broken
only you will feel such pain ~ so raw like nothing felt before
surely life cannot go on, you'll never laugh nor smile again, but then 
someday when you least expect you smile at memories you recollect...

Written 10th April 2021


Contest Name	Any Acrostic of 10 to 12 lines 
Sponsor            Line Gauthier
2nd Place

Contest All yours (Apr  18)
Sponsor Brian Strand 
N/A
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Merryman Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:13 PM
A touching and emotional write. Congrats on your win, Ann! Blessings, Kim M
Gilmour Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:04 AM
Thank you so much Kim for your lovely words and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:43 AM
You chose your entry very well. Excellent take on grief and loss, Ann. Congrats for your win.
Gilmour Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:03 AM
Many thank Andrea for your kind words ~ always appreciated With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Proxenos Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Your grief is natural and it comes and goes as it wants, they say time is a healer but I'm not so sure, when you have lost your nearest and dearest. Congratulations Sara. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gilmour Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:02 AM
Bless you Jennifer and thank you for your words of comfort my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Hello Ann Gilmore, go ahead grieve your love one. You feel the loss because your love one is gone. Yet still in your heart. Blessings my friend,
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Hello Ann, you re welcome. you know they will be with you in spirit. if you need to talk i will listen. Only if you want to. Enjoy your day my friend. I am glad that you can laugh and smile. now. Take care. Your welcome my friend. Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Hello Darlene I thank you for your words of comfort my friend, both my husband and my only son have passed and these feelings I experienced for a long time, but now I can smile and laugh for their love is with me in my heart. With kindest thought Ann xx
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