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Grief

The Great ship "Grief" was sinking. I was no longer manning the ship. I was looking out a window filled with sun and branches. "Grief" and all those people, Will sink to the bottom While I drink beer in a chalice in another world, Where the tears of grievers dry like sins forgiven. I've made it to special shore, yes, in body and spirit, Where lives float like braided links of light And sorrow is seen as an entitlement to any viewer Of love's full scope. (Assignment: Grief)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/10/2010 12:09:00 AM
you portray grief so well in your write. it can be an enlightment. it gives you an overwhelming growth in strength. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/7/2010 12:05:00 PM
mysterious as it should be, excellent imagery! Light & Love
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