Grey Thoughts

Life sucks, life is stuck
Don't be silent when you fall
It is when you can't go back
One more ing broken soul

Life swings, life is curved
Don't let illusions to come
You just want the past to be purged
Although so many things were done

Life is cheating, life is a blessing
Don’t be silent when you love 
It is when you're simply breathing
When you feel it's enough
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 8:38 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Bangalee Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 3:14 AM
Life is cheating, life is a blessing and life is everything .../// beautiful poem
Jam Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Thanks Mahtab!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:35 PM
"Don't be silent when you love" - wise words indeed. Welcome to Soup, Aida. Please keep posting your poems!
Jam Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Thanks Caren! Yes I will
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