Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

- Grey Shadows Never Dies -

The black side of a life betrayal and choked dreams 
Cries of pain that are locked into their souls 

Evil twistfate deals aches and screams 
Inside darkened dungeons filled with peril and woe 

In the trap, feels like stuck in of eternity madness 
Hands are not chained but mind is unclear 

Hidden away from the world today within darkness crying 
Nightmares of life's perils strike deep irons hotly burns 

Blowing with the wind, flying a hurricane 
Shamelessly all trying to live from day to day 

Frozen ice frosting bites cold deeds creeps inside scars 
Slowly from the scrapyard of life's twisted metal crushed 

They cried many tear, tears of hope - wanted life to last
 But life was not fair enough as the remains lay deeply covered 

Unraveling out savagery of an animal cold cutting steel beast cursed 
Piercing howls forgiving the past in order to be redeemed blessed


 A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 20.01.2015 -

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 22, 2015 at 12:25 PM Enjoyed it liam/Anne-Lise. Great collab. God bless.

Poesy Relish January 22, 2015 at 12:21 PM Cold and dark... nice poem Liam

Jan Allison January 21, 2015 at 6:19 PM I commented on this when Anne lise posted it Liam - so deep and dark with amazing imagery - great write my friends a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2015 at 1:04 PM - In the Bible it says: "As the Lord has forgiven you, you shall forgive one another" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 21, 2015 at 12:25 PM Hi Liam & Anne-Lise! This is a very powerful collaboration between the two of you! Wow! Very deep and intense pens here my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise! Very sad but well written stuff right from the very heart and soul. A 7 +++ For each of you! As always you two have golden pens!.smiling.I wish you both a very lovely day!God bless yo u and all His angels from heaven protect you against any evil! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxxoxxx D. ^O^

Eileen Manassian January 21, 2015 at 11:56 AM Ah...I am in a dark mood tonight and this fits well....there is a lot of pain in the world...Thanks for sharing this...especially the hope in the last line. Great collab the two of you.