Russell Sivey Poet Tanka

Grey of Day

In the grey of day
Sun hidden behind the clouds
Trees do look dismal
The track to the forest lost
Haze covers over the ground

Russell Sivey

Contest: Tanka Me Fall or Winter
Sponsor: Francine Roberts

11/2/2013

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Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2013 at 3:22 PM What a dreamy scenery a masterpiece of painting!

Jack Horne November 3, 2013 at 10:06 AM love this beauty, my friend

Nette Onclaud November 3, 2013 at 7:56 AM ohh, mellow the mood signifying the essence of fall/winter .. and a stunning landsacape of words, russel...delighted to have read you today..:) huggs

Donna Jones November 2, 2013 at 7:07 PM Lovely Russell...track to the forest lost...excellent line.....

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2013 at 2:46 PM Interesting work penned..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Gray of day is sometimes dismal but there is always intest in what is seen..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta November 2, 2013 at 8:11 AM Lovely pen picture of the nature and good luck in the contest, Russell