Grey Fabric

Clouds follow black clouds
Are after some blue and pink
On a grey fabric
You are needling dream applique
With your melancholy breaths
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August 11, 2016
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Motaung Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:58 PM
A superb and powerfully rendered tanka thank you
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 2:12 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Fantastic imagery my friend, Probir! A seven.
Gupta Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:36 AM
Thank you ...
Raynes Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:41 PM
such an interesting write Probir.
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August 11, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Thank you ...
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