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Grey Fabric

Clouds follow black clouds Are after some blue and pink On a grey fabric You are needling dream applique With your melancholy breaths __________________________________________ August 11, 2016

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Date: 8/13/2016 9:58:00 PM
A superb and powerfully rendered tanka thank you
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:12:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/11/2016 5:26:00 AM
Fantastic imagery my friend, Probir! A seven.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/11/2016 5:36:00 AM
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:41:00 PM
such an interesting write Probir.
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Date: 8/11/2016 5:40:00 AM
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