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Grey Area Zoned

Struck down powerless with astonishment as the Brocken spectre took its shape Forming one shadow breathing out from the misted oceans A fierce bitter wind whispers curling cries around the mountain howling suffering tunes Where an odd sound echos strangely three times striking the spine with ice trembles Then the crunch of lightening suddenly strikes this note darkness causes uneasy feelings when the shield of light is blinding to the lost yet to be found wanting Opposite the sun enormous magnified shadows begging to be seen casting lots upon the surfaces of clouds opposite one head crowned figure emerges surrounded by glowing halo-like rings the formation of glory rises from within shaping destiny Where rings of coloured light appear directly opposite the sun when sunlight finally meets a cloud of uniformly-sized water droplets refreshing the misted vision held bathed

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Date: 2/4/2018 3:12:00 PM
Liam, the spectre took shape out of the shadows when your pen struck lightning in this thunderous piece. Well done! Have a blessed week, Donna
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, spiritual poem filled of abundant faith, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of pure gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do , Liam!:)Take always very good care of yourself in all!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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