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Grey Area Zoned

Struck down 
powerless with astonishment 
as the Brocken spectre took its shape 
Forming one shadow breathing out 
from the misted oceans
 
A fierce bitter wind whispers 
curling cries around the mountain 
howling suffering tunes 

Where an odd sound echos strangely 
three times striking the spine with ice trembles 
Then the crunch of lightening suddenly strikes this note 
darkness causes uneasy feelings 
when the shield of light is blinding 
to the lost yet to be found wanting 

Opposite the sun enormous magnified shadows 
begging to be seen casting lots 
upon the surfaces of clouds opposite
one head crowned figure emerges 
surrounded by glowing halo-like rings 
the formation of glory rises 
from within shaping destiny 

Where rings of coloured light appear 
directly opposite the sun 
when sunlight finally meets a cloud 
of uniformly-sized water droplets 
refreshing the misted vision held bathed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/4/2018 3:12:00 PM
Liam, the spectre took shape out of the shadows when your pen struck lightning in this thunderous piece. Well done! Have a blessed week, Donna
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, spiritual poem filled of abundant faith, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:))Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of pure gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do , Liam!:)Take always very good care of yourself in all!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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