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Grey

For Color My Mood Poetry Contest  26th May 2025 
               Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
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Ominous leaden clouds sink low in the sky overhead.
As shadows fade the gloomy day increases uncertainties.
I don a sullen expression as morose feelings engulf me.
The ambience that surrounds me is most depressing.
This empty dullness I feel renders me deeply dispirited.
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Buhagiar Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 4:05 AM
Sad but so well written.
Volumes Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 5:25 AM
Do you really think so Victor? I dislike free verse so much, but it was required for the contest in only 5 lines. My poem after it is the same poem in full with rhyme, I think its so much better,, Its called what a difference a rhyme makes. Thanks for your encouraging comment. Best wishes, Wen
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