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Greetings To Lighten the Load

“Good day!” Such makes hearts jubilant While expressed with face that’s vibrant Wishing all to be triumphant Along the Lord’s light --- radiant. “Peace be with you!” Words so joyous Hope-filled against being anxious Since the Creator is gracious Granting sweet bliss, indeed precious. “Take care!” Oh, verily loving Easing the angst of the grieving Cheering with compassion-driving While reaching-out, and care, giving. “God bless you...” echoes victory Assuring goodness*-propped glory Vanquishing downfall’s misery For constant thankfulness’ story. “That’s okay” with great thumb’s up-sign Affirms faith achievement ensign… For roles Almighty did assign My special son nods, “Yes, I’m fine.”
*Psalm 107:21 Oh that men would praise the LORD for his goodness, and for his wonderful works to the children of men! April 25, 2022 1st place, "To lighten the load" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Angela Tune; judged on 5/9/2022.

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Date: 5/9/2022 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Nice words are the best. Words/smile can make someone's day brighter. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 5/9/2022 7:15:00 AM
" Very beautiful words and expressions to make some one's load light. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/25/2022 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful! I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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