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Greetings From a Titmouse

What divine sound I hear
              at the tail-end of twilight!
                    Ah yes, 'tis the sweetest music...

                 to my ears; adding sawdusts 
                              of beauty 
                      to this young dawn!

      A waking world, left joyously seduced,
                   in rapt attention as a tufted titmouse 
                            tweets its honey-coated fairytale

      Greetings to you, too, little bird...



Writing Challenge, October, 2019 -Bird- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 4th Place)
Date written and submitted: 10/08/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Edward, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Thank you, Eve:-)
La France Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Edward congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this appealing poem and I love your image too!
Ibeh Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:32 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:12 AM
what a sweet bird Edward its not one I am familiar with:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Thank you, Jan:-) One of my favorite birds, for sure!
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October 20, 2019 at 1:08 PM
- Lovely poem, Edward :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Oh so nice! Honey-coated fairytale! :)
Ibeh Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Heidi:-)
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