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Greetings

GREETINGS

Look up and witness the sight !
Everyone should  share my delight
At the mighty sky  with myriad light  -
The crackle of stars on a January night.

There, from this  ocean of  nothing
Between me and them, nor up nor down,
Their message comes to me after sailing 
Tirelessly and unendingly , seeking ground:

And  settles into my eye and is  satisfied
To have reached its destination aglow,
Telling me that  starlife still existed
When it set off  so long ago.

In the same  random way
Our own sun’s lightboat reaches them
With the same millennial delay
Over this silk sea without hem.

It means that they know we existed,
That we had life,  our sails didn’t luff.
A  simple greeting is  our message:
And that is epitaph enough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2011 3:48:00 PM
Isn't it amazing how long it takes light to travel through space, Syd? The stars that brighten our skies tonight may well have gone nova by now. At least our sun will be shedding light for millenia to come. Love the last two lines especially! Great poem, Syd. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:07:00 AM
i longed for a rhyme about things unknown// i gaze your at horizon simply reborn!//...your pieces are not of this world, syd; they are beyond limitations! awed!! okay, it's yours for now! ( j/kidding).. :) huggs, nette
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