Greeting the New Day

sun at the skyline

furry creatures start their day;

is it dawn or dusk


5/22/19
Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
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Roper Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful image , Stephen, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Tefft Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Thanks, Eve.
La France Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Stephen congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!
Tefft Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thank you very much. It was a challenge...
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 3:03 PM
Yes day's end or beginning? That is how i feel when I see picture prompts of judges here sometimes. I often can't tell the difference. Both times of day are so gorgeous. Congrats for your win.
Tefft Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Congrats to you, as well.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:03 PM
- Congratulations with your great 2nd place in the contest, Stephen :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Tefft Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thank you! There were a whole bunch of good ones there.
Kwalton Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Although the Haiku form of poetry is not my most favorite, I must say that this one struck me as very poignant and beautiful. I applaud your success! I feel Haiku is a most difficult poem to write. Well done!
Tefft Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Thank you, Louise. Haiku is difficult for me as well. I'm enjoying the challenge to write in forms of poetry I'm less used to, and even some I've never heard of. I'm glad you enjoyed my humble attempt.
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