Greeneyed Monster

lust green eyed monster
wanting what i cannot have...
your love felt by me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Awesome and really well-written senryu.
Mcguire Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Thank you J.W.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:14 PM
I really like this one, Timothy. Congrats for your win
Mcguire Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Thank you so much Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Congrats, Timothy!
Mcguire Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 3:26 PM
thank you Kim!
Kitchin Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Tim, congratulations on your winning placement with your awesome senryu!
Mcguire Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Thank you so much Tania!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Love that twisted end! I expect this one to do well ;) Good luck in the contest! xomo
Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thank you MM! :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 9:39 PM
Good one, Timothy. Fun and catchy.
Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thank you Line!
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