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Greeneyed Monster

lust green eyed monster wanting what i cannot have... your love felt by me

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Date: 8/2/2019 7:03:00 AM

Awesome and really well-written senryu.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/2/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you J.W.

Date: 7/16/2019 6:14:00 PM

I really like this one, Timothy. Congrats for your win

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/17/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!

Date: 7/16/2019 1:10:00 PM

Congrats, Timothy!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/16/2019 3:26:00 PM

thank you Kim!

Date: 7/15/2019 6:58:00 PM

Tim, congratulations on your winning placement with your awesome senryu!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/15/2019 7:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Tania!

Date: 7/9/2019 10:27:00 PM

Love that twisted end! I expect this one to do well ;) Good luck in the contest! xomo

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/9/2019 10:43:00 PM

Thank you MM! :)

Date: 7/9/2019 9:39:00 PM

Good one, Timothy. Fun and catchy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/9/2019 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Line!