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Greener Grass

That is what he wanted,, 
A change from where he grew up.
A novelty in his life 
which pleases the eyes
And lures the heart.
What is new to him is old to another.
What is new path for him,
It's an abandoned one by another
All his life, he pinned for what was there ahead.
It gave him a focus, a motivation.
He strived hard to be up to it.
He cultivated himself with heart pace going steady.
He felt he made it at last.
But then realised all was good
to be part of the trick of fate.
To make him exert relentlessly.
He has reached somewhere which seems nowhere.
That tempting light on the horizon 
Was nothing but an illusion.
He belonged here, where he grew up.
Love been around all the time 
He never saw its abundance and its power.
It was that love that was here, always.
To support him...pull a warm blanket 
Upon him when he was shivering with cold
and the fever of his obsession to succeed.
Years have gone..beautiful instances slipped.
He reached there but suddenly it's all blank.

Will he perish in anguish or will he walk back
To hug what he left behind?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Wow a great reflective poem, impressive metaphor towards the end ESP. Regrets and life experience portrayed well. Kudos.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 1:06 AM
Thanks my dear for the visit and appreciation. Love your analysis. :) Sunita UPD
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February 16, 2019 at 9:47 AM
You are right Sunita... it is rarely greener on the other side...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Ye...it's a sure motivation to venture but once the excitement gone, one wants to be back. Thanks dear friend for your encouraging words. :) Sunita
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