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Greener Days

Green grass crunching under his toes, Green peas steaming into his nose, Green shamrocks flowering his lawn, Green beer chugging making him yawn, Green tea sipping all morning ,hoping to cure. Green money flowing foolishly to promises un pure. Greenbacks so beautiful paying unjust deeds Green turning into greener days of greed.

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Arany P.

Date: 3/18/2009 11:40:00 PM

It was actually fun reading this write... i like writes like this... so out of the box... when you actually think of it!! nice one, Robin! ~ Arany

John Rhinem

Date: 3/18/2009 8:16:00 PM

Smile~Yes, a lady of purpose and concious! Whom also has a flair color and creativity amid fluent flowing and fitting poetry! Very wonderful write Robin! I enjoyed it through and through, for many different reasons! Love & Warmth To You & Yours, John!:)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/18/2009 10:35:00 AM

This is well done...clever writing..thanks for the awesome comments.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/18/2009 5:15:00 AM

So creative and clever. Well done! Love, Shar

James Faulkner

Date: 3/17/2009 9:36:00 PM

lol love this this piece. awsomeness!!!! lol

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/17/2009 7:41:00 PM

Appropriate for St. Patrick's Day post... LOL This is a nice piece that expresses green in ways we don't always see it. Nice write! Smiles from Lolita