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Greened Ley Lines Visual 2


Ley lines, greenery seasonal harvest stretching for miles
Such patience undertaken, combined with mans intelligence
Fatigue is soon expressed, witnessed by erratic crop lines




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M. L. Kiser

February 25, 2015 at 4:28 PM

An excellent Sijo...I can see the green lay lines.

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 2:08 PM

As I mentioned in my comments with Dorian below, I quite like this poem. Thank you as always MLK, James :) xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

February 21, 2015 at 8:48 PM

Great pen James! Well written sijo here my dear friend. A big 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D""

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 2:03 PM

Hiya Dorian, glad you liked this poem as I quite like it myself. Mega hugs for you, James :)

Kp Nunez

February 16, 2015 at 7:46 PM

True. One can also find its parallel in life. You have a gift in encapsulating an observation while remaining consistent with its universal interpretation. A 7. Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 1:57 PM

Thank you kindly Kim, much appreciate your kind words, James :)

Skat A

February 15, 2015 at 10:46 PM

James, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

James Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 1:48 PM

Thank you kindly SKAT, much appreciated, James :)

James Peranteau

February 11, 2015 at 12:19 PM

I've learned some new things with your write my friend, in regard, "Ley Lines", and I must say, and I include many other writes I've read of yours in the past;you have fantastic visuals where you reside dear poet ! I see why your writes have such muse James....TY for sharing sir ! Have a blessed week.........much love, james

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 1:26 PM

Hiya James, I so love your visits to my pages, of which soothe me. It makes me smile so much your comments. Have a most lovely weekend Noah and you Sir, mega hugs always, James xxx

Sara Kendrick

February 10, 2015 at 3:51 PM

Ithink it was the aliens that made those roads through the crops..Enjoyed reading your approach to the contest..Congrats.Sara

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 1:02 PM

I hope it wasn't Aliens Sara ;0) Thank you girl for your always lovely comments, James :)

M. L. Kiser

February 9, 2015 at 3:04 AM

Quite an excellent Sijo!

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 12:57 PM

Thanks MLK, always appreciated, hugs, James :)

Jan Allison

February 8, 2015 at 2:34 PM

oh I missed this clever write James - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 5:26 AM

Hiya Jan, apologies for my late reply, been away for a few days, hugs, James xxx

Richard Lamoureux

February 8, 2015 at 9:05 AM

Congratulations!

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 5:19 AM

Many thanks Richard :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2015 at 1:17 AM

Nice one, James. I enjoyed seeing your entry in my contest and congrats for HM.

James Fraser

February 20, 2015 at 4:18 AM

Hiya Andrea, many thanks for honoring my poem in your recent Sijo contest, always appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

February 6, 2015 at 9:18 AM

:) I can relate to this as my parents somehow let me to view such.. :)! the last line.. :)!

James Fraser

February 7, 2015 at 2:31 PM

There's no better scene than seeing the crops in abundance in the fields. It tells me all is well with nature and Father God. The last line the reader can work out, hugs always, James xx