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Greened Ley Lines Visual 2

Ley lines, greenery seasonal harvest stretching for miles
Such patience undertaken, combined with mans intelligence
Fatigue is soon expressed, witnessed by erratic crop lines




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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M. L. Kiser Date: 2/25/2015 4:28:00 PM An excellent Sijo...I can see the green lay lines. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 2:08:00 PM As I mentioned in my comments with Dorian below, I quite like this poem. Thank you as always MLK, James :) xx

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/21/2015 8:48:00 PM Great pen James! Well written sijo here my dear friend. A big 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D"" Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 2:03:00 PM Hiya Dorian, glad you liked this poem as I quite like it myself. Mega hugs for you, James :)

Kp Nunez Date: 2/16/2015 7:46:00 PM True. One can also find its parallel in life. You have a gift in encapsulating an observation while remaining consistent with its universal interpretation. A 7. Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 1:57:00 PM Thank you kindly Kim, much appreciate your kind words, James :)

Skat A Date: 2/15/2015 10:46:00 PM James, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 1:48:00 PM Thank you kindly SKAT, much appreciated, James :)

James Peranteau Date: 2/11/2015 12:19:00 PM I've learned some new things with your write my friend, in regard, "Ley Lines", and I must say, and I include many other writes I've read of yours in the past;you have fantastic visuals where you reside dear poet ! I see why your writes have such muse James....TY for sharing sir ! Have a blessed week.........much love, james Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 1:26:00 PM Hiya James, I so love your visits to my pages, of which soothe me. It makes me smile so much your comments. Have a most lovely weekend Noah and you Sir, mega hugs always, James xxx

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/10/2015 3:51:00 PM Ithink it was the aliens that made those roads through the crops..Enjoyed reading your approach to the contest..Congrats.Sara Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 1:02:00 PM I hope it wasn't Aliens Sara ;0) Thank you girl for your always lovely comments, James :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 2/9/2015 3:04:00 AM Quite an excellent Sijo! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 12:57:00 PM Thanks MLK, always appreciated, hugs, James :)

Jan Allison Date: 2/8/2015 2:34:00 PM oh I missed this clever write James - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 5:26:00 AM Hiya Jan, apologies for my late reply, been away for a few days, hugs, James xxx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/8/2015 9:05:00 AM Congratulations! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 5:19:00 AM Many thanks Richard :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2015 1:17:00 AM Nice one, James. I enjoyed seeing your entry in my contest and congrats for HM. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/20/2015 4:18:00 AM Hiya Andrea, many thanks for honoring my poem in your recent Sijo contest, always appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/6/2015 9:18:00 AM :) I can relate to this as my parents somehow let me to view such.. :)! the last line.. :)! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/7/2015 2:31:00 PM There's no better scene than seeing the crops in abundance in the fields. It tells me all is well with nature and Father God. The last line the reader can work out, hugs always, James xx

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/5/2015 7:13:00 PM Very nice pen James! I enjoyed your sijo, my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely evening! In His Light! :)Love n hugs! xxx D. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 2/7/2015 2:18:00 PM Thank you Dorian. All I can do is what I see, and then I write what comes from me, hugs, James xx