Notes About The Poem

Green Worm Nursery Rhyme

There was a big green worm on a leaf,
Whose body was so fat and stiff;
She could only crawl  but not squirm,
Her silky skin was so soft  and firm.

When a worm-eating black bird came,
She spoke bravely saying her name;
“I’m Pilar at your service”, she said
“An artist in the book… hope, you’ve read.”

The bird was so eager to eat her,
Saying, “You’re just good for my dinner”
But before he could finish mumbling,
Leaf had been trimmed fast, a fledgling!

Black bird hopped joyfully in tears,
Remembering his son so dear;
"Wow, my son's portray!'" So impressed,
You're talented caterpillar, so blessed."

"Thanks! Can we be friends?" Pilar replied
"Sure. You crawl at my back for a ride,"
The bird picked the art leaf with his beak
And flew down the bushes near the creak.



March 18, 2023    9.45am

©Leonora G. Galinta


rhymezone.com


Kids Creativity and Learning
Contest Judged:  3/20/2023 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Place 1       (multi-1st w, 3-4 single w, multi-HM)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Schiavina Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Marvelous imaginative poem. Congratulation on full of fun winning poem.
Gasun Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:35 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Frances. God bless you always and your golden pen. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 4:46 PM
A creative write and an entertaining story for both kids and adults alike... I enjoyed the read, myself, Len... Well done, my friend. Congratulations on your win!
Gasun Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 12:34 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Kelly. May God bless you always and your golden pen. Hugs
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Dear Len, really enjoyed reading your beautiful nursery rhyme. It's not easy to create poems and stories for children's level - you have shown your mastery! Congratulations!
Gasun Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 11:52 PM
Dearest friend Mala, thank you so much for reading my rhyme. I'm glad you enjoyed. You're write it's not easy my dear friend; just got the muse and inspiration the other time to write. Thanks a lot also for your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you soon when I get back home ok. Hugs
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Len, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful nursery rhyme for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:01 PM
Thank you vmuch for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear friend Eve. Your acknowledgement through my win was an honor and your approval means a lot to me. I can probably use in my class in the future or for my young nephews and nieces. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:25 PM
cute one, my friend. Congrats for the win
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Andrea. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Cute Len! Congratulations on your win! :)
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Linda. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 12:06 PM
- Of course they should be friends ... a lovely poem, Leonora :) - Congratulation on your win :) - hugs
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Annelise. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Congratulation on your win. A creative story/write. Have a blessed day..................
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 10:48 AM
This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, Len, and congrats on your win.
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Sotto. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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March 18, 2023 at 2:56 AM
Lovely nursery rhyme.
Gasun Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Thank you vm for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear friend Victor. God bless you and your writings always. Hugs
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