Green With Envy

GREEN WITH ENVY

Young Bill always wore green, his clothes freshly ironed and pristine,
His shiny green shoes were always polished and clean,
But constantly consumed with envy he was,
An unpopular, young man simply because
He was obsessed with envy, for he envied anything green!
His friends new green car and his sister’s green house,
Mom’s green garden furniture, his niece’s pet green mouse.
Bill regretfully, always told greenish white lies,
But got away with them, as he had the most wonderful big green eyes,
He met a girl with green eyes who would soon be his spouse!
Bill bought his future wife an engagement ring with emeralds green,
The most beautiful green stones that anyone had ever seen,
They bought a house in the countryside so green, their absolute pride,
His green wealth, Bill could certainly not hide,
He became a changed man, but still obsessed, his new car is green!



Entered for Green humor Rhymes Contest,
Sponsored by Caroline Devonshire
15/3/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:05 PM
hey, there , JEnnifer. I love how you rhymed this delightful poem about a man obsessed with green. VERY well done, and congrats for your win.
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March 27, 2019 at 3:48 AM
Thank-you Andrea - it was a fun contest - did you get my soup mail? Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Callus Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Pleased to be back with congratulations, Jenny :) Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul
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March 27, 2019 at 3:46 AM
Thank-you Paul, that is very kind of you - appreciate your congrats. Warm regards, Jennifer.
Hinshaw Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:21 PM
A delightfully witty verse, Jennifer, that kept me rapt to the end! Congratulations for your well-deserved win and many thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest - Bob
Proxenos Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 12:29 AM
Hi Robert, so glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you so much for your congrats. Stay well, poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:26 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Green" Humor Contest, Jenny :) - greeting from // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Hi Sunshine Smile, Thanks for your re-visit - and your congrats. Love and hugs, Jenny
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March 23, 2019 at 8:42 PM
Although the syllable counts were way off in your limerick, it was still fun to read, Jennifer. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries and judging is always a challenge. Best wishes, Carolyn
Proxenos Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:09 AM
Hi Carolyn, thank you for my placing in your contest - I started off with 3 limerick verses, then I realized that lines c and d were too long, so I changed it to a rhyme, but very silly of me kept it in Limerick mode - your contests are fun, Blessings Carolyn, I will be more careful next time Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Hi Jennifer, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:12 AM
Thank-you Alexis, and to you, keep well my friend and blessed. Hugs, jenny.
Johnson Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Well if he likes green eggs and ham, they're all his. Fun read Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 2:09 AM
Hi Robert, enjoyed your humorous remark - i would do the same - However I'm sure he would somehow make an exception with eggs and ham and stay far away from them! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 3:20 AM
I love the many shades of green. Your poem was entertaining and clever Jennifer. I think Carolyn will like it a lot. Best of luck in the contest! : )
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 6:14 AM
Thank you for a lovely comment Connie, and a very kind one! I wish you luck in the contest also my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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March 20, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Jennifer this is truly a very clever poem, and a joy to read....love it...
Proxenos Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 10:06 AM
Thank-you Harry for your kind compliment. I thought about the topic I wanted to write about for a couple of hours until my husband said to me, could you write a poem about green envy, sure I said! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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March 18, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Interesting Jennifer … I had an aunty who had an aversion to any material article that was green. She would not sit in a green car; step inside a house painted green and so on. Because of her I can believe your poem wholeheartedly - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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March 19, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Hi Lindsay, come to think of it my gran On my Dad's side (as my Dad was from Yorkshire, England, and my mom from Athens, Greece) also would not have anything emerald green on or near her. Thanks for the comment Lindsay - poetry hugs, Jennifer.
May Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Nicely penned Jennifer..GL in the contest..
Proxenos Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Thanks Joseph - I enjoy contests that are fun - this one was. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Really enyoyed this.LOL Very clever! Thank you. Love, Panagiota Have fun at NIKOS'S.)))
Proxenos Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for the comment Panagiota, and congrats once again for getting POTD for that amazing poem of yours - well done. We will, It's a taverna but with South African influence and the most amazing Greek food - like moms cooking! Poetry hugs
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 2:49 PM
quickly, soupmail. (about last line beneath date)
Proxenos Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thanks Sweetie, deleted it! Hugs - Jenny.
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 2:30 PM
as green as it gets, jen... enjoyed your many anecdotes!...huggs
Proxenos Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for a cute comment Nette - Bill was as green as they come, but I think getting married sorted him out! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Kiser Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Changes are great but, I see no reason why Bill should change his car color; green is lively. Love it!
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March 18, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Hi MLk - lovely to have you pay a visit - I guess Bill is just obsessed with the color green! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Fun poem, Jennifer. Soupmail for ya.
Proxenos Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 1:22 AM
Thanks Andrea - going to Soupmail now. Love, Jenny,
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Your green fingers do not apply solely to gardening, Jenny, but also to poetry writing! Young Bill deserves to appear on the winners' list:) Warm regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:11 AM
Hi Paul, do dot see any new poems posted - hope you are well, that's all that matters as you are a very special poet and souper for me! Thank-you for a lovely comment, hope the judge thinks so also. Poetry hugs and love, Jenny!
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March 15, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Sounds like Bill was Irish lol. Good luck. Tom.
Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Hi Tom, yes perhaps he does! I haven't thought of his heritage but lets make it irish, it suits him! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Leffanta Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:35 PM
As I recall, Green was Lord Chancellor, was he not? I believe other contestants will be green with envy! Good luck! Aloha! Rico
Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:44 AM
Hi Rico, Thank-you for believing in me but there are some other great poets on soup. I just thought that if Bill bought a new house and a new car, then he must have money and as some notes in every country have green, it would enhance the poem a bit more if used wealth and green together. Ill check about green and the Lord Chancellor. Thanks for an awesome comment Rico, Poetry hugs and Yasou, Jennifer
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March 15, 2019 at 1:37 PM
- Excellent entered for the green humor contest, Jennifer :) - Really gave me a big smile, I believe you have poestet the winning poem :) - Good luck ... I'm green with envy :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:56 AM
Thank-you for your confidence in me soul sister, and i hope your words come true - I incorporated green on every line to emphasize my point. Thank you for your good wishes Sunshine Smile, you have just brought sunshine to us today, which makes me smile! Poetry hugs , Jennifer
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Wow!Jennifer, What a good string of limericks. I found them entertaining as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:03 AM
My Husband actually said could you write a poem about 'Green with envy" As soon as I put down my 1st words down i told him i could - he's a great guy! Glad the limericks entertained you dear Alexis. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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