Green Town, Ohio

...inspired by 'Dandelion Wine' 
   by Ray Bradbury


Green Town, Ohio,
where memories congregate,
sneakers and time machines, 
grandmas and goodies;
leaping tall buildings 
and smelling the fresh cut grass,
junebugs and crickets compete
as the best; sparklers and firecrackers 
fizzle for dominance,
lighting our path through
the warm summer nights; 
holding hands, tentative,
feeling the moment,
you can't put a price 
on such innocent bliss;
Jimmy and Emily
out by the old oak fence,
sharing those memories
sealed with a kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pettit Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Yes, I can see the Bradbury style of writing in this splendid work. Very impressive Keith.
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May 8, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Right on Keith. You can't put a price on it. Love this one. Hey, I still watch TCM when I want to see a real movie. Heartwarming write. Vince
Shango Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 10:35 AM
A perfect circle from beginng to end ... a middle filled with dainty sweet visions condensed to imageries .. I love it. Salute to the poet.
Pate Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:55 PM
Very nice and nostalgic. I see white picket fences and neighbors talking on cool nights.
Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:50 PM
You capture the delicate serenity of a peaceful rural community. (They drink "Dandelion Wine" on As the World Turns.) Your images are lively and playful. Nice work, Keith!
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