Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Green Tea Cleans Your Thoughts -

It was written on the facebook wall
                          What was your goal, you have no soul

                                     When you are armed,
                                      with your charmed

                                You live inside a pink bubble
                                 have no feelings of trouble

                   A love poem to someone you've never met ... gee
                             Take a cup of green Japanese tea

                                   Getting cheated isn’t fun
                            It's a sticky situation for everyone

                                      You've gone too far
                            You are happily married - au revoir

                       Don't blame the tea, you ought to have seen
               That everything became so incredible stupid and green













14.03.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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"Green" Humor Contest
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
4th place in the contest

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Arturo Michael April 9, 2019 at 4:40 PM I read this again and you're right..." everything became so incredible stupid and green"

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2019 at 6:04 PM Or maybe he acted more like the Hulk!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 4:54 AM :))))

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2019 at 6:04 PM I like your take on the green eyed monster using green tea. Congrats for your win! Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 4:55 AM - Many thanks Andrea, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 26, 2019 at 11:19 AM Green tea can't be blamed for a sticky situation, Anne-Lise! On the contrary, it ought to clear the mind. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2019 at 11:41 AM - It is exactly what it does, Paul :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray March 24, 2019 at 4:45 PM Wonderful! I love that rolling rhyme kind of thing. Congratulations Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 1:09 AM - Many thanks Jean, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw March 24, 2019 at 1:18 PM Such a delightful and witty write, dear Anne Lise! Congratulations on for your well-deserved win and many thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest - Bob Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 1:08 AM - Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos March 24, 2019 at 8:36 AM Well done Anne-Lise - revisiting to congratulate you on your win my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 8:41 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 23, 2019 at 8:39 PM You spun a witty yarn here, Sunshine. Enjoyed very much. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries and judging is always a challenge. Best wishes, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 8:26 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 16, 2019 at 3:39 PM how witty, anne... i do take green tea no matter what facebook says, lol!... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 4:03 PM - I say no thanks to both :) - Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 15, 2019 at 4:40 PM oh, Facebook, Anne-Lise, it can be challenging, at least it brings tea, I always enjoy a cup or iced glass both times of the year, enjoyed reading it Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 1:09 PM - I never been on FB ... but I know it happens a lot of things there :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Sheri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne March 15, 2019 at 10:01 AM love this playful write Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:20 PM - Jack, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael March 15, 2019 at 12:13 AM A tasty salad...like the freedom of expression and the bit of spice you added...All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:19 PM - Many thanks Arturo, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose March 14, 2019 at 8:27 PM Lots of bubbly good lines here S.S. winning wishes just for you, hugs xo Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:19 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 14, 2019 at 6:07 PM Nicely done Sunshine, I love it...:) Good luck in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 6:21 AM - Many thanks for comment and your lovely visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman March 14, 2019 at 4:53 PM All those recipes and remedies, Great poem..love it......Took a cab drive on a train on 'you tube' through Norway..wow i'm just blown away, with the beauty of the country, must take a trip after all my DNA says my family was originally viking... Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 6:20 AM The tourist boats are already here ... welcome to my beautiful country :) - http://avaldsnes.info/ .... https://opplevavaldsnes.no/ ... You will find this right outside my windows :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 14, 2019 at 1:41 PM Somebody got caught out, and no you can't blame the tea or anything else. Good luck Sunshine. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2019 at 1:46 PM - He can blame himself, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos March 14, 2019 at 12:10 PM Hi dear soul sister, green tea, very good for you - a lovely couplet. One day I bought a packet of green tea, but how did I not see (Anti- Constipation (in bold) on the packet! We had a meeting with one of our clients the next morning and needless to say i spent my time mostly in the loo, I had to excuse myself, and my husband had to do the work and talking for the two of us - I am wary of buying green tea in a hurry, since that day! Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs Anne-Lise, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2019 at 1:24 PM - Dear Jennifer, I'm critical of intestinal flushing ... I don't recommend it :))) - Be careful :) - Many thanks for the fun comment and your lovely visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 14, 2019 at 9:27 AM Enjoyed the look and feel of green tea in your poem..best for a win, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2019 at 1:17 PM - The feeling of shame ... should be green, Vijay :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 14, 2019 at 8:46 AM I love drinking green tea Anne Lise! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2019 at 1:15 PM - I rarely drink tea Jan, but I have to have coffee :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2019 at 8:36 AM Refreshing as " ... a cup of green Japanese tea..." dearest, Anne-Lise! Hope my comment stays this time! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2019 at 8:39 AM - I hope so as well :) - Many thanks my friend ... always welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)