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ð??¼...Preparing the High Quality Japanese Green Tea (Gyokuro) with a Mild Seaweed Taste and Antioxidant Properties, Japan, Asia

It was written on the facebook wall What was your goal, you have no soul When you are armed, with your charmed You live inside a pink bubble have no feelings of trouble A love poem to someone you've never met ... gee Take a cup of green Japanese tea Getting cheated isn’t fun It's a sticky situation for everyone You've gone too far You are happily married - au revoir Don't blame the tea, you ought to have seen That everything became so incredible stupid and green 14.03.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved "Green" Humor Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire 4th place in the contest

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Date: 4/9/2019 4:40:00 PM
I read this again and you're right..." everything became so incredible stupid and green"
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Date: 3/26/2019 6:04:00 PM
I like your take on the green eyed monster using green tea. Congrats for your win!
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Date: 3/27/2019 4:55:00 AM
- Many thanks Andrea, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2019 6:04:00 PM
Or maybe he acted more like the Hulk!!
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Date: 3/27/2019 4:54:00 AM
:))))
Date: 3/26/2019 11:19:00 AM
Green tea can't be blamed for a sticky situation, Anne-Lise! On the contrary, it ought to clear the mind. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/26/2019 11:41:00 AM
- It is exactly what it does, Paul :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 4:45:00 PM
Wonderful! I love that rolling rhyme kind of thing. Congratulations Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/25/2019 1:09:00 AM
- Many thanks Jean, for the friendly visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 1:18:00 PM
Such a delightful and witty write, dear Anne Lise! Congratulations on for your well-deserved win and many thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest - Bob
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Date: 3/25/2019 1:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2019 8:36:00 AM
Well done Anne-Lise - revisiting to congratulate you on your win my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/24/2019 8:41:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/23/2019 8:39:00 PM
You spun a witty yarn here, Sunshine. Enjoyed very much. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries and judging is always a challenge. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2019 8:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/16/2019 3:39:00 PM
how witty, anne... i do take green tea no matter what facebook says, lol!... happy huggs
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Date: 3/16/2019 4:03:00 PM
- I say no thanks to both :) - Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2019 4:40:00 PM
oh, Facebook, Anne-Lise, it can be challenging, at least it brings tea, I always enjoy a cup or iced glass both times of the year, enjoyed reading it
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:09:00 PM
- I never been on FB ... but I know it happens a lot of things there :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Sheri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2019 10:01:00 AM
love this playful write
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:20:00 PM
- Jack, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2019 12:13:00 AM
A tasty salad...like the freedom of expression and the bit of spice you added...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:19:00 PM
- Many thanks Arturo, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 8:27:00 PM
Lots of bubbly good lines here S.S. winning wishes just for you, hugs xo
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 6:07:00 PM
Nicely done Sunshine, I love it...:) Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:21:00 AM
- Many thanks for comment and your lovely visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 4:53:00 PM
All those recipes and remedies, Great poem..love it......Took a cab drive on a train on 'you tube' through Norway..wow i'm just blown away, with the beauty of the country, must take a trip after all my DNA says my family was originally viking...
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Date: 3/15/2019 6:20:00 AM
The tourist boats are already here ... welcome to my beautiful country :) - http://avaldsnes.info/ .... https://opplevavaldsnes.no/ ... You will find this right outside my windows :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 1:41:00 PM
Somebody got caught out, and no you can't blame the tea or anything else. Good luck Sunshine. Tom.
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Date: 3/14/2019 1:46:00 PM
- He can blame himself, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 12:10:00 PM
Hi dear soul sister, green tea, very good for you - a lovely couplet. One day I bought a packet of green tea, but how did I not see (Anti- Constipation (in bold) on the packet! We had a meeting with one of our clients the next morning and needless to say i spent my time mostly in the loo, I had to excuse myself, and my husband had to do the work and talking for the two of us - I am wary of buying green tea in a hurry, since that day! Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs Anne-Lise, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/14/2019 1:24:00 PM
- Dear Jennifer, I'm critical of intestinal flushing ... I don't recommend it :))) - Be careful :) - Many thanks for the fun comment and your lovely visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 9:27:00 AM
Enjoyed the look and feel of green tea in your poem..best for a win, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 3/14/2019 1:17:00 PM
- The feeling of shame ... should be green, Vijay :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 8:46:00 AM
I love drinking green tea Anne Lise! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2019 1:15:00 PM
- I rarely drink tea Jan, but I have to have coffee :) - Thanks for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2019 8:36:00 AM
Refreshing as " ... a cup of green Japanese tea..." dearest, Anne-Lise! Hope my comment stays this time! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/14/2019 8:39:00 AM
- I hope so as well :) - Many thanks my friend ... always welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)