green summer

let us

drink the chartreuse

yellow green fields with our

eyes till we escape our ramparts

with wings 




-maria corado
5/16/18

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Date: 7/24/2018 2:15:00 PM
Yes, that is the uplifting feel of summer! Love this.
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:11:00 PM
wow, this is gorgeous verse.
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Date: 5/18/2018 2:22:00 PM
I'm up for it! Pretty stuff
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hija de la luna
Date: 6/13/2018 10:39:00 PM
Great, July! thanks!
Date: 5/17/2018 12:43:00 PM
ohh, maria/hija... you certainly fly with this vivid cinquain; i enjoyed this one!.. huggs
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hija de la luna
Date: 6/13/2018 10:38:00 PM
thank you, nette! huggs back!
Date: 5/16/2018 2:11:00 PM
I like the tasty comparison between the yellow green fields and the matching colours of the famous French liqueur, Maria. They both make us grow wings in an intoxicating way:) Warm regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2018 4:21:00 AM
Maria this is a sharp, succinct cinquain and I love it. Kudos!
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