Green Summer

let us

drink the chartreuse

yellow green fields with our

eyes till we escape our ramparts

with wings 




-maria corado
5/16/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Marine Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Yes, that is the uplifting feel of summer! Love this.
De La Luna Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 10:57 PM
thanks for loving this piece, Aqua!
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:11 PM
wow, this is gorgeous verse.
De La Luna Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 10:57 PM
thank you, Andrea!
Onclaud Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 12:43 PM
ohh, maria/hija... you certainly fly with this vivid cinquain; i enjoyed this one!.. huggs
De La Luna Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:38 PM
thank you, nette! huggs back!
Capitano Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 4:21 AM
Maria this is a sharp, succinct cinquain and I love it. Kudos!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace