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Green Still

Green, still, watcher, prays on prey, thats thoughtless and blind leafs stay, he moves; prized

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations Jessica on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol

Rick Parise

Date: 7/9/2010 9:37:00 PM

Congrats to you!!!!Nice imagery~enjoyed~have you seen the "sweethearts" new Haiku contest?you should give it a go!!!!~Blessing to you ~Rick

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 7/9/2010 9:32:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku here, dear Jessica. Congrats and thanks for your comments. Love, Iolanda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2010 1:07:00 PM

congratulations on your win, jessica. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2010 12:23:00 PM

Jessica, Congratulations on your poem's sussess in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/8/2010 9:46:00 PM

Great one. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Date: 7/8/2010 9:23:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2010 8:34:00 PM

Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in the Mantis contest ..way to go.. enjoy.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/8/2010 8:33:00 PM

A very thoughtful poem, Jessica. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Date: 7/7/2010 1:49:00 PM

Interesting use of imagery to give us a glimpse of this creature. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/7/2010 2:40:00 AM

Can see the praying mantis in your Haiku looking for prey! Nice write and good luck in the contest! Thank you for your comment on 'No Beer but Whisky'...And have a nice day...Gert