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Green Still

Green, still, watcher, prays
on prey, thats thoughtless and blind
leafs stay, he moves; prized
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
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July 9, 2010 at 9:32 PM
Beautiful Haiku here, dear Jessica. Congrats and thanks for your comments. Love, Iolanda
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July 9, 2010 at 1:07 PM
congratulations on your win, jessica. Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Jessica, Congratulations on your poem's sussess in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Great one. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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July 8, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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July 8, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in the Mantis contest ..way to go.. enjoy.. with luv..
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July 8, 2010 at 8:33 PM
A very thoughtful poem, Jessica. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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July 7, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Interesting use of imagery to give us a glimpse of this creature. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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July 7, 2010 at 2:40 AM
Can see the praying mantis in your Haiku looking for prey! Nice write and good luck in the contest! Thank you for your comment on 'No Beer but Whisky'...And have a nice day...Gert
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