Green Sea Turtle

The sea unleashes its children green 
seeking a sandy shielded defense and 
swimming wings for legs, scraping 
their way from seaweed waters at low 
tide the sea awakens...

Those crusted, frothy shells demand
their way toward the grasses as destiny 
calls. Barely an eye to see, eroded like a 
silver spoon, they plummet forward
jerky as a scared dog, tumbling at each
step... heavy trucks bumping over a
rocky road. As the gods would have
it they succeed to lay their eggs 
on shore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ayala Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of poetry. Great write!Kika
Gibson Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Well done, Julie...I am much more educated on turtles after this contest. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:19 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:17 PM
I love how yours reads. Short and descriptive, just how I like!! congrats. Some awesome imagery in it too.
Heckman Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for reading my work. I surely appreciate your feedback :-)
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Wonderful cycle. Congrats on the win. julie
Heckman Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram
Callus Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Yes, I can imagine them moving clumsily on hard land, looking for a place where to lay their eggs. Very well described, Julie. An amazing process indeed. // paul
Heckman Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Loved doing research on those fellas
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 5:45 PM
wonderful description good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
Heckman Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Thanks Jan
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