Sigrid Ermine Poet Haiku

Green Readiness

glossy green hearts hang
                              slotted on blotched grey branches
                                            flappers try to fly




17th August 2020

Haiku Nature Contest

Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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V. Deepa August 26, 2020 at 11:23 PM Lovely imageries.. fappers try to fly Congratulations on your wonderful win.:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards Sigrid Ermine August 27, 2020 at 7:18 AM Thank you so much, Deepa.

Kai Michael Neumann August 25, 2020 at 8:47 AM that is so sweet ... Sigrid Ermine August 25, 2020 at 4:13 PM Cheep cheep!!

Jeanne Mcgee August 23, 2020 at 2:22 PM your words allow for imagination while expressing the scene. lovely. Sigrid Ermine August 23, 2020 at 2:33 PM That's very nice of you. Thank you for stopping by, Jeanne

Eve Roper August 22, 2020 at 8:19 PM Congratulations on your win, Sigrid, great imagery. Hugs Eve Sigrid Ermine August 23, 2020 at 3:45 AM Thank you, kind of you, Eve.

Newton Ranaweera August 22, 2020 at 5:38 PM Congratulations, Sigrid, on your win!! It's a music embedded great paint!!

Jan Allison August 22, 2020 at 4:19 PM love the imagery Sigrid, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2020 at 1:20 PM very cool imagery. Congrats on a great job, Sigrig. Sigrid Ermine August 22, 2020 at 4:19 PM Thank you!!!

Tania Kitchin August 22, 2020 at 12:25 PM Sigrig, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku! Sigrid Ermine August 22, 2020 at 4:21 PM Thank you so much, Tania. Thanks for hosting it. Looking forward to next green pasture poem.

Sam Kauffman August 22, 2020 at 11:40 AM Wonderful alliteration and use of color, Sigrid. So visual! Makes me think of the "bleeding heart" flower. Congratulations! Sigrid Ermine August 22, 2020 at 4:22 PM It's good of you to comment, Sam. Yes, five foot high Mulberry tree is being a real show off in back yard right now,!

Belden Raiser August 18, 2020 at 6:43 PM I like the way this captures the scene. Sigrid Ermine August 18, 2020 at 7:46 PM Churrs