Green Hearts Wish World

time is youthful girl
it snatches age pearl 
joint of bone 
feels weak-lorn
yet green hearts wish world


-December 03, 2019 Chattogram
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:41 AM
"time is youthful girl" - you captured me at line one Mahtab and held me tightly until the end.
Na Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:37 AM
Nicely penned Limerick. Thanks for sharing Mahtab
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