Green Embers

Beacons of the night,
Frolic in the midnight air:
Luminous fireflies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Great capture of fireflies Raul>>James
Richards Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Something we don't have in California are fireflies. Years ago when we took a trip with our children to the southeastern states and they saw fireflies...I've never forgotten their excitement one evening when they spied them for the first time!
Higgins Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 5:50 AM
This is a colorful haiku filled with great imagination..you paint the canvas of these writes so well.
Chircop Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 1:12 AM
beautiful your painted night,frolic and dance in midnight air,beacons attracting attention-luminous hot fire---awesome--charma
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