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Green Embers

Beacons of the night, Frolic in the midnight air: Luminous fireflies.

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James Fraser

Date: 7/4/2009 1:41:00 PM

Great capture of fireflies Raul>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/3/2009 7:07:00 AM

Something we don't have in California are fireflies. Years ago when we took a trip with our children to the southeastern states and they saw fireflies...I've never forgotten their excitement one evening when they spied them for the first time!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/3/2009 5:50:00 AM

This is a colorful haiku filled with great imagination..you paint the canvas of these writes so well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/3/2009 1:12:00 AM

beautiful your painted night,frolic and dance in midnight air,beacons attracting attention-luminous hot fire---awesome--charma