Kim Rodrigues Poet Haibun

Green Deer

The green deer poses, as the other forages in front of the effervescent waterfall, as foaming white mountains heighten the experience, and the forest unfolds with its hunter-green pines and the bounty of shadowed waters roll seeking the archway - an invite into this bodaciously sublime paradise.

Eden waits for you
its imagery paused in time
plum of paradise

dustcover removed 
exhalation of its pulse
milk & honey flute

7/19/2019

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Alkas Poetry July 20, 2019 at 1:35 AM A relevant and imagery continuation of another excellent text, maintained the literary depth ... salute dear Kim alkas Kim Rodrigues July 20, 2019 at 7:00 AM Thank you, Alkas!

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2019 at 4:09 PM very lovely imagery, Kim. You are so creative. Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2019 at 4:12 PM Thanks so much, dear friend!

Arturo Michael July 19, 2019 at 9:04 AM "plum of paradise" I like this...Heavenly poem... Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2019 at 9:09 AM Thank you, Arturo. It is based off our first purchased painting! It looks like paradise to me!

Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2019 at 8:56 AM What an interesting piece. Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2019 at 9:09 AM Thank you, Richard!