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Green Deer

The green deer poses, as the other forages in front of the effervescent waterfall, as foaming white mountains heighten the experience, and the forest unfolds with its hunter-green pines and the bounty of shadowed waters roll seeking the archway - an invite into this bodaciously sublime paradise.
Eden waits for you its imagery paused in time plum of paradise dustcover removed exhalation of its pulse milk & honey flute 7/19/2019

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Date: 7/20/2019 1:35:00 AM
A relevant and imagery continuation of another excellent text, maintained the literary depth ... salute dear Kim alkas
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Alkas!
Date: 7/19/2019 4:09:00 PM
very lovely imagery, Kim. You are so creative.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend!
Date: 7/19/2019 9:04:00 AM
"plum of paradise" I like this...Heavenly poem...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo. It is based off our first purchased painting! It looks like paradise to me!
Date: 7/19/2019 8:56:00 AM
What an interesting piece.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Richard!

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