Green Apples

Garden freshly picked apples
Green, tart granny Smith's
Crunchy and juicy, total
Taste explosion-wow
Apple pie and juice
Yummy tastes
Great!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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David Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 2:04 AM
Interesting ! Doris, I love the description, so perfect and cute. well done.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 9:11 PM
V ERy cute!!
Knop Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Wow, Yummy, Doris! I do love apple pies and French apple tarts!!! Or even baked apples with custard!!! All are yummy!!! Nice write, enjoyed the read! And thank you for your comments!...Gert
Mannan Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 10:20 PM
Ummmmh Yummy! loved the structure. Zulu is a tribe in Africa.
Anish Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 5:56 PM
"An apple a day keeps the doctor away" Nice tribute fo a fine fruit! The form is fascinating as well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Walters Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 6:35 PM
I love tart, green apples! This reminds me how long its been since I had one or made a pie with them! This is a yummy write! Best wishes- hugs, Kris
Neels Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Yummy Doris, where's mine :) enjoyed this write.. Hope you are having a great Monday as well
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