Greek Universe Concerns

Fire is hot.
Is it not?

Earth is too dirty
for one so purty.

In water, I'd sink,
I think...

and what about the air?
Is it really there?
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Rodgers Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Hello David, I am still pondering whether the air is still there. What a joy reading today. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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June 12, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Hi Daniel, glad you enjoyed it! I think you have a new icon picture - nice one. Haha, I'm thinking we two should make a deal. If someone wants an intelligent treatment of subjects like this, I will direct them to your page, and if someone wants something ridiculous, they can look here - lol.
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