Greaze

my grandpa's bike needs greasing, so do his knees
he hates his bike and wants to walk with the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 11, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Ebrahim, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Sharifat Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 8:52 AM
thank you dear Sara
Johnson Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
Sharifat Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 8:53 AM
thank you dear Joyce for reading.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your winning place xx
Sharifat Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 8:54 AM
thanks so much Mandy :)
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:55 PM
I really enjoy this, Ebrahim. I'm wising you good luck in the contest!
Sharifat Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 5:27 PM
thanks dear friend, i'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you for your kind comment :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 3:24 PM
oh, this is really cute!!! ME LIKES.
Sharifat Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 5:28 PM
thank you, im glad you liked it :)
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