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Greatest Transport

I like to be somewhere were I can't be traced I world of magic or stuck in the replay of my outtakes A thousand pictures saved and phrases enjoyed take place I could be a mystical being or an animal having race I could be a goddess, or remembering when I ate Daddy's plate Pretending I'm kissing a movie star or the kisses of my love; can't replace O yes, my funnest and greatest transportation, are the ones that my mind would make.

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Emm 'N Ashe Lemons

Date: 8/2/2010 5:18:00 AM

genuinely THE best poem i've read all week! loved it!! very true, no where takes you where the mind delivers!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/2/2010 2:31:00 AM

I really loved your take on the challenge Jessica! I didn't think of this but you are so right, the mind's definitely the best to transport oneself-- I'm sure this is gonna be a winner! I hope so! :) -- nikko :)

John Rhinem

Date: 8/2/2010 1:05:00 AM

~ "A thousand pictures saved and phrases enjoyed take place; I could be mystical or an animal having race" ~ Smile, I would opt for A Princess for, You Seem So Very Beautiful" ~ I am going to have to run but, it has been a joy reading Your Amazing Poetry tonight and, I shall make a note to visit "Your Lovely Brightness" tomorrow ~ "My Love, to You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day, 'Precious Jessica Arteaga,'" Bye Dear!:) ~ Ps. "Very Beautiful Poem" ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/2/2010 12:52:00 AM

Smile ~ "Yes," just as long as Your there; Your heart and soul; I do not believe that it matters where or who You are in regards to ones verse!? ~ I love this Jessica and, I'm going to make it a fave but, I have a very funny feeling that, it surely shall not be the last! And, You have this beautiful ability; so very rare; to reach inside of someone and stir their very soul as waters that, only true poetess' and poets seem to do so ~ "Magical" ~ ....Cont:)