Greatest Day

The greatest day in my life started out with,
alot of pain and some pushing.
In the end left me overwhelm with joy.
Holding the most precious package in my arms,
was the greatest day in my life.
Seem's like million diapers and a few years later..
I keep having greatest day everytime,
I see you smile or say mommy I love you.
That with a hug and a kiss,
turns any bad day into a good day.
The greatest day of all will always be,
first day I held you in my arms.
Than again everyday with my little man,
is the greatest day in my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 1, 2010 at 5:38 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Nioma. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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