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Greater Love

Greater Love I shivered and watched him as the snow fell Frail, tattered clothes, bearded, no shoes, but--smell! I thought--what a contrast--comparing sights, But love was a lesson I'd learn that night! Not from plastic steeples or rhetoric, Philanthropy or emotional trick... I would learn to look in my own mirror For compassion, mercy, empathy--clearer. This complex multiple of nature lives In dying daily to Ego-------Forgives! Then I saw neither black, white, red nor green, But only insolence and heard him scream: "Get away from us! You Freak! Reprobate!" Then with his cane, knocked him down--oh such hate! Top hat and tails perched with pride by the door Assisting the dilatant he adored. Snow was a gossamer curtain all 'round. Vision obscured even steps on the ground. Lights came from nowhere as they crossed the street, Aimed for the dilatant--innocent, sweet. Watching I saw from the shadows immerge Sprinting like 'Coldstream Guard'--out past the curb, That same man, pushing the dilatant fair Out of harms way as he flew in mid-air. Emerging unscathed from the ice and snow: "Who was that man? Tell me! I want to know!" The crowd huddled 'round like a football team Gawking with questions of what they had seen. A donor card was his only ID. No name--just a wish--was all they could see. Donor card cashed in...Science and query... A grave in an obscure cemetery, With small unadorned head-marker amends: "Greater love has no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friends." 5/14/2012 deborah burch©

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Date: 6/7/2012 2:54:00 PM
Amazing write....so good....
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Deborah Burch
Date: 6/7/2012 7:31:00 PM
thank you so much John... :-)
Date: 5/18/2012 8:05:00 PM
Isn't it sad people can be so cruel when someone is a bit different? A wonderful poem describing a rejected soul. A great entry for the contest Deborah
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/18/2012 9:04:00 PM
indeed it is Liz...so many different ways to describe it as well...sometimes it isnt even visible...Thank you for your kindness and encouraging words to me...they mean so much...big hugs, and welcome back...love ya deb
Date: 5/17/2012 10:04:00 PM
Deborah, congratulations in Michael's contest.. Take care and have yourself a good night ~ always* PD
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/18/2012 4:37:00 PM
Thank you soooooooo much PD...big hugs, love ya, deb
Date: 5/17/2012 5:40:00 PM
Wow!This is awesome and beautiful...Congratulations on your super win Deb ....XOXO....
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/18/2012 4:35:00 PM
Oh, Olusequan, thank you so much for your kindness!! I am deeply honoured :) big hugs, love ya deb
Date: 5/17/2012 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on you win in Michael's "Love" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/18/2012 4:34:00 PM
thank you so much Carol...don't forget to have a cup of tea!! ;) and breathe...big hugs, love ya deb
Date: 5/17/2012 7:41:00 AM
*wow thats amazing! your a amazing, keep up the poetry * :) --- Larissa :D
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/17/2012 9:59:00 AM
:) thank you so much dear Larissa!! You are pretty amazing yourself...thank you for your kind encouragement...it means soooo much to me....I am enjoying reading your work as well...:) miss poetess ;) thanks for stopping by and big huggggsss, love ya, deb :)
Date: 5/17/2012 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing write! ----Lori
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/17/2012 10:03:00 AM
:) thank you so very much Lori for your kind encouragement!! it means so much to me!! love ya deb
Date: 5/17/2012 5:56:00 AM
Ahh Deb such a strong story my entry was too simple and personal there were so many parts of this write I really liked [and of course the over all concept was GREAT] I also loved how you mixed quatraines and couplets. Soup Mail Light & Love
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/17/2012 10:07:00 AM
Oh 'Highness', *curtsey* thank you much!!! I am honoured and sooo greatful...love ya bunches, deb
Date: 5/17/2012 12:49:00 AM
woohoo....Cap'n Deb all aboard for a huge congrats on your stupendous win, loved this heartfelt poem first time around..David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/17/2012 10:10:00 AM
*blush* aye aye...beer and steaks all round!! lol...you get to bring the peach cobbler this time ;) Cap'n deb
Date: 5/16/2012 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 10:57:00 PM
thank you so very much Samia!! :)
Date: 5/16/2012 7:08:00 PM
congrats on your win Deb..
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 10:55:00 PM
thank you so much Joseph :)
Date: 5/16/2012 7:08:00 PM
congrats on your win Deb..
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Date: 5/16/2012 6:06:00 PM
Congrats. Lovely poem story.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 6:53:00 PM
:) thank you Joann!! :)
Date: 5/16/2012 5:31:00 PM
What an amazing story you have told...excellent job, Deborah! Congratulations, well deserved win!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 6:52:00 PM
oh Carrie, thank you so much, for your encouragement and kindness...it means so much to me...big hugs, love ya deb
Date: 5/16/2012 4:02:00 PM
Congrats!!!!!! On your 1st place win in my contest!! What an amazing write your gave us... hugs n luv Michael
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 6:50:00 PM
OMG!! *tear* Michael, I am shocked, awed, and emotionally overwhelmed!! Thank you so much for your kindness...it was an awsome and very appropriate contest you have given us...thank you...big hugs, *tears* love ya ,deb
Date: 5/15/2012 7:16:00 PM
Wow, a real tear jerker is this entry. I can see it in lights already as a big winner. It brought some tears to these tired eyes, and welcome they were too, because my eyes are dry from too much reading. Excellent story told from a master poet Deb. Early congrats! Hugs, Lotus
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 6:56:00 PM
Connie :) thank you so very much...I am honoured!! So very glad you were touched...a pure heart...big hugs,love ya and miss ya , deb
Date: 5/15/2012 12:46:00 PM
Truly there can be no greater love than to give up your life for someone else. Excellent use of images, Deborah. I could see this happening so clearly through your words. Winning wishes for the contest! Love, carolyn
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/16/2012 6:58:00 PM
:) thank you Carolyn, so much !! You honour me with your kindness and encouragement...thank you , big gentle hugs, love ya deb
Date: 5/15/2012 12:46:00 PM
Truly there can be no greater love than to give up your life for someone else. Excellent use of images, Deborah. I could see this happening so clearly through your words. Winning wishes for the contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2012 3:32:00 AM
Cap'n Deb, love the flow, it holds you from start to end, good luck..David
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/15/2012 8:25:00 AM
aww, thank you David...:) hugs, love ya, cap'n deb
Date: 5/14/2012 7:16:00 PM
Beautiful Poem, Deborah! Thanks for sharing and have a great night! =Juli-Michelle=
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Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 7:40:00 PM
:) thank you so very much Juli-Michelle!! I am deeply honoured you took the time to read my work and enjoyed it...big hugs, love ya deb

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