Greater Love

Greater Love

I shivered and watched him as the snow fell 
Frail, tattered clothes, bearded, no shoes, but--smell!
I thought--what a contrast--comparing sights,
But love was a lesson I'd learn that night!

Not from plastic steeples or rhetoric,
Philanthropy or emotional trick...
I would learn to look in my own mirror
For compassion, mercy, empathy--clearer.

       This complex multiple of nature lives
       In dying daily to Ego-------Forgives!

Then I saw neither black, white, red nor green,
But only insolence and heard him scream:
"Get away from us! You Freak! Reprobate!"
Then with his cane, knocked him down--oh such hate!

Top hat and tails perched with pride by the door
Assisting the dilatant he adored.
Snow was a gossamer curtain all 'round.
Vision obscured even steps on the ground.

       Lights came from nowhere as they crossed the street,
       Aimed for the dilatant--innocent, sweet.

Watching I saw from the shadows immerge
Sprinting like 'Coldstream Guard'--out past the curb,
That same man, pushing the dilatant fair
Out of harms way as he flew in mid-air.

Emerging unscathed from the ice and snow:
"Who was that man? Tell me! I want to know!"
The crowd huddled 'round like a football team
Gawking with questions of what they had seen.

       A donor card was his only ID.
       No name--just a wish--was all they could see.

Donor card cashed in...Science and query...
A grave in an obscure cemetery,
With small unadorned head-marker amends:
"Greater love has no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friends."

5/14/2012
deborah burch©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 7, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Amazing write....so good....
Burch Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 7:31 PM
thank you so much John... :-)
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May 18, 2012 at 8:05 PM
Isn't it sad people can be so cruel when someone is a bit different? A wonderful poem describing a rejected soul. A great entry for the contest Deborah
Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 9:04 PM
indeed it is Liz...so many different ways to describe it as well...sometimes it isnt even visible...Thank you for your kindness and encouraging words to me...they mean so much...big hugs, and welcome back...love ya deb
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May 17, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Deborah, congratulations in Michael's contest.. Take care and have yourself a good night ~ always* PD
Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Thank you soooooooo much PD...big hugs, love ya, deb
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May 17, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Wow!This is awesome and beautiful...Congratulations on your super win Deb ....XOXO....
Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Oh, Olusequan, thank you so much for your kindness!! I am deeply honoured :) big hugs, love ya deb
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May 17, 2012 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on you win in Michael's "Love" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 4:34 PM
thank you so much Carol...don't forget to have a cup of tea!! ;) and breathe...big hugs, love ya deb
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May 17, 2012 at 7:41 AM
*wow thats amazing! your a amazing, keep up the poetry * :) --- Larissa :D
Burch Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:59 AM
:) thank you so much dear Larissa!! You are pretty amazing yourself...thank you for your kind encouragement...it means soooo much to me....I am enjoying reading your work as well...:) miss poetess ;) thanks for stopping by and big huggggsss, love ya, deb :)
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May 17, 2012 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing write! ----Lori
Burch Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 10:03 AM
:) thank you so very much Lori for your kind encouragement!! it means so much to me!! love ya deb
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Ahh Deb such a strong story my entry was too simple and personal there were so many parts of this write I really liked [and of course the over all concept was GREAT] I also loved how you mixed quatraines and couplets. Soup Mail Light & Love
Burch Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Oh 'Highness', *curtsey* thank you much!!! I am honoured and sooo greatful...love ya bunches, deb
Williams Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:49 AM
woohoo....Cap'n Deb all aboard for a huge congrats on your stupendous win, loved this heartfelt poem first time around..David
Burch Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 10:10 AM
*blush* aye aye...beer and steaks all round!! lol...you get to bring the peach cobbler this time ;) Cap'n deb
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May 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win!
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:57 PM
thank you so very much Samia!! :)
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May 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win!
May Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:08 PM
congrats on your win Deb..
May Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:08 PM
congrats on your win Deb..
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:55 PM
thank you so much Joseph :)
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May 16, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Congrats. Lovely poem story.
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:53 PM
:) thank you Joann!! :)
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May 16, 2012 at 5:31 PM
What an amazing story you have told...excellent job, Deborah! Congratulations, well deserved win!
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:52 PM
oh Carrie, thank you so much, for your encouragement and kindness...it means so much to me...big hugs, love ya deb
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May 16, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Congrats!!!!!! On your 1st place win in my contest!! What an amazing write your gave us... hugs n luv Michael
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May 16, 2012 at 6:50 PM
OMG!! *tear* Michael, I am shocked, awed, and emotionally overwhelmed!! Thank you so much for your kindness...it was an awsome and very appropriate contest you have given us...thank you...big hugs, *tears* love ya ,deb
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May 15, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Wow, a real tear jerker is this entry. I can see it in lights already as a big winner. It brought some tears to these tired eyes, and welcome they were too, because my eyes are dry from too much reading. Excellent story told from a master poet Deb. Early congrats! Hugs, Lotus
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:56 PM
Connie :) thank you so very much...I am honoured!! So very glad you were touched...a pure heart...big hugs,love ya and miss ya , deb
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May 15, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Truly there can be no greater love than to give up your life for someone else. Excellent use of images, Deborah. I could see this happening so clearly through your words. Winning wishes for the contest! Love, carolyn
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May 15, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Truly there can be no greater love than to give up your life for someone else. Excellent use of images, Deborah. I could see this happening so clearly through your words. Winning wishes for the contest! Love, carolyn
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:58 PM
:) thank you Carolyn, so much !! You honour me with your kindness and encouragement...thank you , big gentle hugs, love ya deb
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 3:32 AM
Cap'n Deb, love the flow, it holds you from start to end, good luck..David
Burch Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 8:25 AM
aww, thank you David...:) hugs, love ya, cap'n deb
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May 14, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Beautiful Poem, Deborah! Thanks for sharing and have a great night! =Juli-Michelle=
Burch Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:40 PM
:) thank you so very much Juli-Michelle!! I am deeply honoured you took the time to read my work and enjoyed it...big hugs, love ya deb
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