Greater Consciousness

Greater Consciousness  Aug 15, 2015


There's a day, that's coming soon
and there are those who'll see it clear
It's for those who have no room
for hateful thoughts or fear

From different races, different creeds
They'll recognize each other
and just the one will fill the needs
of each,  sister and brother

Then this world, will have to change, For evil's lacking hosts
and in the Heavens, love will rain, filled with Holy Ghost


With animals, they'll be as one
No more hunters, no more prey
And all will thrive beneath the Sun
In greater consciousness that day
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Gulley Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your win Jerry, with this spectacular write. A pleasant and spiritual blessing to read. Its days like this I am so proud to be a part of the group here on poetry soup, it is a honor. Wow...(7) and a favorite for me....Sharon
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September 4, 2015 at 6:15 PM
Jerry, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
Curtis Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Thanks Skat
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 2:07 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Jerry!
Curtis Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 6:56 AM
thank you so much Dr.
Godwin Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Wow, 3rd placers are blowing me away and I'm determined to visit each of your poems. A wonderful flowing, rhyming, patterned poem that I thoroughly enjoyed ... CayCay
Curtis Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Thanks CayCay, what a wonderful comment to make, it certainly makes my day.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Their can be no higher consciousness than being at one with the spirit. Congratulations on a fine win and witness.
Curtis Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Richard and God Bless !
Curtis Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Very well written , some thing to look forward to, Good Luck in the contest.
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