Great White Wedding

I married a shark yesterday; 
we went to Atlantis to stay -
she showed me the sights
(between lots of bites)
as Plato was running away...


written 16th September for Brian's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/28/2020 9:33:00 AM
Hi Jack, you have a wonderful sense of humour my friend. - this is funny, imaginative and creative - I love it - Plato is my favorite philosopher and the name of my oldest Labrador! Congratulation with your wonderful win, had I beeen the judge I would have made it a tp win. had to write another comment, Loved this write. Hugs, and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 9/26/2020 11:25:00 PM
Brilliant, love this. great win and deserved.
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Date: 9/19/2020 10:34:00 AM
this is quite creative and I see it was a win Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 9/17/2020 3:11:00 PM
Hope they were 'love' bites; in that case no harm was done :) Congrats on your win my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:22:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Jack - wonderful work that was fittingly rewarded! Blessings and best wishes to you and yours, my friend! :o)
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Date: 9/17/2020 2:46:00 AM
Another witty write - you are excellent at these Jack and especially limericks. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/16/2020 12:09:00 PM
ha ha ha great one Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
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