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Great White Wedding

I married a shark yesterday; we went to Atlantis to stay - she showed me the sights (between lots of bites) as Plato was running away... written 16th September for Brian's contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/28/2020 9:33:00 AM

Hi Jack, you have a wonderful sense of humour my friend. - this is funny, imaginative and creative - I love it - Plato is my favorite philosopher and the name of my oldest Labrador! Congratulation with your wonderful win, had I beeen the judge I would have made it a tp win. had to write another comment, Loved this write. Hugs, and blessings. Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2020 11:25:00 PM

Brilliant, love this. great win and deserved.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2020 10:34:00 AM

this is quite creative and I see it was a win Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/17/2020 3:11:00 PM

Hope they were 'love' bites; in that case no harm was done :) Congrats on your win my friend. Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/17/2020 5:22:00 AM

Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Jack - wonderful work that was fittingly rewarded! Blessings and best wishes to you and yours, my friend! :o)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/17/2020 2:46:00 AM

Another witty write - you are excellent at these Jack and especially limericks. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2020 12:09:00 PM

ha ha ha great one Jack:-) hugs Jan xx