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Great White Wedding

I married a shark yesterday; 
we went to Atlantis to stay -
she showed me the sights
(between lots of bites)
as Plato was running away...


written 16th September for Brian's contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

September 28, 2020 at 9:33 AM

Hi Jack, you have a wonderful sense of humour my friend. - this is funny, imaginative and creative - I love it - Plato is my favorite philosopher and the name of my oldest Labrador! Congratulation with your wonderful win, had I beeen the judge I would have made it a tp win. had to write another comment, Loved this write. Hugs, and blessings. Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

September 26, 2020 at 11:25 PM

Brilliant, love this. great win and deserved.

Andrea Dietrich

September 19, 2020 at 10:34 AM

this is quite creative and I see it was a win Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus

September 17, 2020 at 3:11 PM

Hope they were 'love' bites; in that case no harm was done :) Congrats on your win my friend. Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden

September 17, 2020 at 5:22 AM

Sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Jack - wonderful work that was fittingly rewarded! Blessings and best wishes to you and yours, my friend! :o)